Ollohberdi (Writing 7.0)


Гео и язык канала: Узбекистан, Английский
Категория: Курсы и гайды


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✨ Around 2+ Years experience
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Узбекистан, Английский
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Курсы и гайды
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Interview yoqdi va tavsiya qilaman.




Task 1 📊


The chart shows the careers people secured in one region of Australia in 2001 and 2008.

Overall, the percentage of people pursuing careers in sales, computing, and nursing saw an upward trend, while the opposite trend was observed for accounting and farming. Notably, sales remained the most popular career option, while farming was the least preferred.

Focusing on the increases first, around 175,000 people were employed in sales, up from just above 160,000 in 2001, maintaining its position as the most popular choice. The number of people working in computing also increased to 80,000, up from just above 60,000, marking the highest growth. Lastly, nursing saw a slight rise, from approximately 55,000 in 2001 to 60,000 in 2008, though the change was the least pronounced.

The remaining career options, on the other hand, experienced a decline in the number of people employed. Starting at 60,000, the number of accountants dropped to around 50,000 by 2008. The least popular career in 2001, farming, became even less common in 2008, with just 20,000 people employed, down from an initial 30,000.



@Writing_O


Hali IELTS esdan chiqib ketmadi 😁


01.02.2025 Reading Passage 2(@IELTS_PAPERS).pdf
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IELTS'chilarni aytishi bo'yicha bo'sa Passage 2 qiyinmush, pff. Shu testni 1ta ishlab ko'rila, bunga ham video darslik qilib beraman.

PS: I realized that I'm mostly uploading video lessons for CEFR, and decided to remember IELTS too.


@Writing_O


reading part 5 Solitary_Bees_Reading_Task.pdf
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CEFR'chilardi aytishi bo'yicha part 5 qiyinakan. Shu testni 1ta ishlab ko'rilar, men keyin qanday ishlash va to'g'ri tahlil qilish haqida video darslik qilib beraman.

@Writing_O


When you teach a student effective, workable, and even proven structures and methods, yet they still write the sh*t they learn from content creators.


Judayam ko'p vazifa qilasilar, lekin daraja umuman o'smayaptimi?
Опрос
  •   Ha, kop dars qilaman, osish sezmiman
  •   Yo manda osish bo'ladi
18 голосов


Репост из: Diyorbek's IELTS
When you teach a student how to write an overview but he/she keeps doing the things the old way


2️⃣0️⃣ LAW


@Writing_O


Speaking part 2ga tayyorlanyotkanda insonni tasvirlashni o'rganish kerak. O'shanda hamma topic uchun tushib ketaveradi. Teacher, qoshni, dost, amma, xola, pochcha, bola, chaqa, mol, qoy.....


Supportive person:

John is the ultimate supportive friend—he’s always there for those in need. Whether it's offering practical help with a difficult project at work or simply providing a shoulder to lean on during tough times, he’s a constant source of encouragement. I’ve seen firsthand how his calm and reassuring presence can completely change someone’s outlook. For instance, when a close friend was going through a tough breakup, John didn’t just offer advice; he made sure to be there in person, giving that emotional support that people often need the most. His loyalty and empathy are truly remarkable.


Vocabulary 📃:
1. Ultimate (C1) – The best or most significant; the highest or final point of something.
2. Supportive (B2) – Offering help, encouragement, or sympathy.
3. A shoulder to lean on (B2) – Someone who provides emotional support.
4. Constant source of encouragement (B2) – Always available and dependable for motivating or cheering someone up.
5. Reassuring presence (C1) – A calming or comforting feeling someone provides just by being there.
6. Completely change someone’s outlook (C1) – To significantly alter how someone views a situation.
7. Tough breakup (B2) – A difficult emotional separation between partners.
8. Offer advice (B1) – To give recommendations or suggestions.
9. Emotional support (B2) – Helping others manage their emotions, especially in difficult times.
10. Loyalty (C1) – A strong feeling of allegiance, faithfulness, or support.
11. Empathy (C1) – The ability to understand and share the feelings of others.



@Writing_O


Faqat Task 2 o'qisam 7 chiqadi degan narsani unutinglar


For sure around 8-8.5 ☕️


Some believe that the government should support artists like musicians, painters, and poets, while others argue that this is a misuse of funds. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People have different views as to whether the government should invest in artists like musicians, painters, and poet or if it is a waste of financial resources. While spending on art can boost the local economy, I believe that this represents a misallocation of funds.

Proponents of government support for artists cite various reasons to support their stance. They assert that if governments allocate funds to artistic and cultural initiatives, they preserve historical monuments, indigenous crafts, and traditional practices in the form of art, thereby protecting cultural heritage from fading away. This, in turn, can enable future generations to experience and appreciate their history and traditions firsthand, strengthening national identity and pride. In a world dominated by cultural erosion due to globalization and modernization, investing in art can make a huge difference when it comes to survival and preserving a country’s unique identity.

Despite these arguments, I believe that investing in art is not a prudent use of public funds, especially in countries with poor public services. When governments support artists, such as painters and musicians, they often incur significant costs for specialized tools and mentorship, leaving fewer resources for critical public services like healthcare, education, and transportation. This budgetary constraint can limit opportunities to improve these essential services, ultimately reducing the overall quality of life. This issue is particularly detrimental in developing countries, where citizens already face challenges from inadequate public services and poor living conditions. Therefore, the government should allocate their funds to public services to boost happiness and satisfaction, both of which enhance public life.

In conclusion, although investing in art can provide reinforced cultural identity, I contend that this is a misallocation of funds as people still suffer from poor-quality public services. Only by allocating money to these services can we make significant strides in terms of improving public life.



@Writing_O


Buni ma'nosi nima? Ona tili o'qidigonlar bilsa kere.


Турк назмида чу мен тортиб алам,
Айладим ул мамлакатни якқалам. (Alisher Navoiy)


@Writing_O


Ota onalar tomondan op qaraganda*


Qanaqa oqtuvchiga koproq ishonishadi?
Опрос
  •   Oqitishi yaxshi lekin yosh
  •   Oqitishi yomon bas lekin qayidur universitetni tugatkan, va yoshi kotta
8 голосов

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