Well, you either dont understand ielts writing task2 or you didnt read sample.
I went off-topic in some parts like last paragraph when i mentioned its benefits for mind or general health. Topic was about how to learn cultures, that means i got wrong.
We learn by making mistakes. Other parts if i am not mistaken are okay.
I went off-topic in some parts like last paragraph when i mentioned its benefits for mind or general health. Topic was about how to learn cultures, that means i got wrong.
We learn by making mistakes. Other parts if i am not mistaken are okay.