development of the essay

Intro - paraphrase and choose one side

Body 1 - why early is better
can finish the education sooner
(expand) complete the university,get a degree, enter the workforce - contribute to the economy sooner
Additionally, compared to sponges
EXPLAIN - absorb information quickly.
If incorporated earlier and properly, games can help them to acquire language and useful skills
Set a strong foundation for future

Body 2 - They should start later -
For one, early edu stifle creativity.
Need to play as it is important for creativity,problem solving and social skills.
(Mechanical example) Numerous studies - game is important for health cognitive and emotional development.
Moreover, early start can make teachers' job challenging
(why?) May be immature= have not reached important social milestones- learn to take turns and interaction, typically developed as they grow older.