Asadillo of All Trades


Гео и язык канала: Узбекистан, Английский
Категория: Блоги


Owner Toshkanov Asadillo
@asadillo_2411
ESL teacher 👨‍🏫
Ielts scores:
6.0 in 2022
7.5 in 2023
8.0 in 2024
8.5 soon....
A student of SamDCHTI 3/4 XTA👨‍🎓
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Гео и язык канала
Узбекистан, Английский
Категория
Блоги
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Recap of the day:
1. Reading an article ✅
2. Writing task 1 analysis ✅
3. Writing task 2 analysis ✅
4. Speaking practice - new structures ✅
5. Shadowing 10 minutes ✅


Репост из: Alisher | Writing 8.0
Nafsim, Ramazon keldi.


Passion_vs_Money_Should_You_Choose_a_Job_You_Love_or_One_That_Pays.pdf
209.9Кб
#article


I have just read this article and it was a blast. Given it is a 7-page long, it takes a lil much time to finish. However, it is worthy.


development of the essay

Intro - paraphrase and choose one side

Body 1 - why early is better
can finish the education sooner
(expand) complete the university,get a degree, enter the workforce - contribute to the economy sooner
Additionally, compared to sponges
EXPLAIN - absorb information quickly.
If incorporated earlier and properly, games can help them to acquire language and useful skills
Set a strong foundation for future

Body 2 - They should start later -
For one, early edu stifle creativity.
Need to play as it is important for creativity,problem solving and social skills.
(Mechanical example) Numerous studies - game is important for health cognitive and emotional development.
Moreover, early start can make teachers' job challenging
(why?) May be immature= have not reached important social milestones- learn to take turns and interaction, typically developed as they grow older.


#usefulchunks
1. Something has been a matter of debate= an ongoing debate
2. Advocates of VIEW 1= Proponents of VIEW1= Those who argue that VIEW1
3. Set a strong foundation
4. compared to sponges
5. stifle=stop
6. healthy cognitive and emotional development
7. social milestones
8. take turns and interact appropriately with peers
9. delaying the start of SOMETHING


#task2analysis


#task2analysis


#usefulchunks

1. measured in energy units
2. obtained from
3. throughout the period
4. becoming the second highest...
5. SOMETHING was consistently produced in much larger quantities than others
6. peak was not maintained
7. making it the second highest ....
8. after which it began a downward trend
9. starting at a level similar to where SOMETHING ended
10. followed a trend of continuous growth
11. This growth accelerated in the second half of the period


#task1analysis


Nothing done today - if you want to give up, just give up😕


7.5, with LR being 7 again

#painful
#7thtime


Let's recap the day -
1. Reading an article ✅
2. Writing task 1 analysis ✅
3. Writing task 2 analysis ✅
4. Preparing speaking answers ✅
5. Shadowing for 25 minutes ✅


#part2


Describe a country that you would like to visit in the future


Traveling alone has several advantages, the most notable being complete independence. Solo travelers have the freedom to plan their itinerary according to their preferences, without having to compromise with others. It also fosters self reliance and confidence, as individuals must navigate unfamiliar places, make decisions, and solve problems on their own. When I come to say about downsides, loneliness can be a significant challenge, especially for those who enjoy companionship. Safety is another concern, as solo travelers might be more vulnerable to scams or unforeseen difficulties.


#part3


Social media has undeniably transformed the tourism industry, serving as a powerful marketing tool that influences travelers' decisions. Platforms like Instagram, TikTok, and YouTube allow travelers to share visually appealing content, inspiring others to visit new places. Travel influencers and bloggers play a significant role in promoting destinations, hotels, and experiences, often reaching a global audience more effectively than traditional advertisements.


#part3


Very very clear and rich in factual information


While travelling abroad offers several tangible benefits, such as exposure to new cultures, broadening one's overall perspective, and developing independence, it may not ALWAYS be a good idea for everyone or in every situation. For instance, some destinations may have safety risks due to political instability, health concerns, or natural disasters. Lets take Thailand as a pertinent example. In recent years it has become increasingly common for people to travel to this country because of its exquisite nature coupled with affordable prices for both food and accommodation. Having said that though according to official Thai publishing websites, terrorists are more prone to carry out attacks in Thailand. This can be obvious from recent statistics, highlighting this nation's safety index which was 7.7 in 2024, a decline from 8.0 in 2023. In my opinion, this downward trend can be attributed to these potential risks.


#part3

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