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Another nearly perfect task 2(which I hopefully think it is 8-8.5) written with my students, exchanging ideas 💡
Although competition is reasonable at work, school, and in everyday life, some people emphasise cooperation more than competition. Healthy competition is far more effective for people in many ways.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why cooperative work can be significantly important. One of the primary benefits of cooperation is networking and gaining experience in different spheres. For example, when people are involved in a group activity or project, they tend to exchange ideas and share their knowledge, resulting in far better outcomes and fostering a sense of respect for one another. In this case, they can learn some good aspects of their colleagues, such as punctuality and communication skills, a combination of factors that also leads to a higher level of efficiency, especially at workplaces.
On the other hand, competition has a significant role to play in both personal and professional development. When there is a competitive spirit among people of different ages at various places, including educational establishments and workplaces, individuals can spontaneously perform better because they do not want to fall behind other competitors. As a result, they can develop a diverse collection of skills, ranging from creativity to tolerance. Apart from the intellectual benefits, competition brings about many innovations and improvements in the manufacturing industry and business sectors. For instance, there is a growing demand for a new generation of smartphones across the world. To meet such demand, different companies and brands are appearing to come up with new products with improved features, a factor contributing to a widespread choice. To be precise, many people now have a chance to decide on purchasing items of different types at a lower cost thanks to a variety of options, which makes the overall buying experience far more affordable for consumers. Hence, competition is not only helpful in limited areas but also on a large scale.
To conclude, while the idea of collaboration at work and in life can be beneficial to some extent, I agree with those who think that competition is much more important and useful regarding developing several abilities and expanding the variations people have.
(Nearly 350 words)
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Another nearly perfect task 2(which I hopefully think it is 8-8.5) written with my students, exchanging ideas 💡
TASK2 : Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other.
Although competition is reasonable at work, school, and in everyday life, some people emphasise cooperation more than competition. Healthy competition is far more effective for people in many ways.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why cooperative work can be significantly important. One of the primary benefits of cooperation is networking and gaining experience in different spheres. For example, when people are involved in a group activity or project, they tend to exchange ideas and share their knowledge, resulting in far better outcomes and fostering a sense of respect for one another. In this case, they can learn some good aspects of their colleagues, such as punctuality and communication skills, a combination of factors that also leads to a higher level of efficiency, especially at workplaces.
On the other hand, competition has a significant role to play in both personal and professional development. When there is a competitive spirit among people of different ages at various places, including educational establishments and workplaces, individuals can spontaneously perform better because they do not want to fall behind other competitors. As a result, they can develop a diverse collection of skills, ranging from creativity to tolerance. Apart from the intellectual benefits, competition brings about many innovations and improvements in the manufacturing industry and business sectors. For instance, there is a growing demand for a new generation of smartphones across the world. To meet such demand, different companies and brands are appearing to come up with new products with improved features, a factor contributing to a widespread choice. To be precise, many people now have a chance to decide on purchasing items of different types at a lower cost thanks to a variety of options, which makes the overall buying experience far more affordable for consumers. Hence, competition is not only helpful in limited areas but also on a large scale.
To conclude, while the idea of collaboration at work and in life can be beneficial to some extent, I agree with those who think that competition is much more important and useful regarding developing several abilities and expanding the variations people have.
(Nearly 350 words)
More knowledge is here👇
@ibrohimielts