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There are several benefits to walking. First and foremost, it improves physical health. Mainly because, walkers burn sufficient calories, strengthen their muscles, and enhance their immune systems. As a result, they can maintain a healthy weight and stay away from chronic diseases like obesity. Consequently, their physical fitness and overall quality of life get better.

🥇Coherence and cohesion:

Referencing ✅ [ it, this, their, they ]
A central topic ✅ [ The impact of walking on physical health ]
Paraphrasing ✅ [ walking and walkers ]
Logical sequencing ✅ [ logical flow of ideas ]
Cohesive devices ❌ [ Overuse of linkers like "first", "mainly because", "as a result", and "consequently" ]

🥈Grammar range and accuracy:

No errors in punctuation and grammar ✅
A wide range of structures ❌ [ only simple sentence forms ]
Flexibility ❌ [ only basic use of common structures ]

There are several benefits to walking. When people integrate daily walks into their schedules, they can not only burn sufficient calories and strengthen their muscles but also boost their immune systems and cardiovascular health. Such improvements can ultimately mitigate the risk of chronic health conditions like obesity, enhancing physical fitness and overall quality of life in the process. In a world dominated by sedentary lifestyles due to technological advances and busy lifestyles, walking can make a big difference in maintaining a healthy weight and staying in shape.

🥇Coherence and cohesion:

Referencing ✅ [ they, their, such ]
Paraphrasing ✅ [ walking, daily walks, improve, improvements ]
Cohesive devices ✅ [ linkers do not attract attention ]
A central topic ✅ [ the impact of walking on physical health ]
Logical sequencing ✅ [ smooth flow of ideas ]

🥈Grammar range and accuracy:

No errors in punctuation and grammar ✅
A wide range of structures ✅ [ simple, complex, and uncommon ]
Flexibility ✅ [ The use of "In a world dominated by" ]

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