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In the fight against crime, police forces and governments are increasingly using security cameras in public places. Some people are opposed to this, saying that it invades our privacy.

Discuss both these views and finally give your opinion.
Write your opinion in an appropriate style and format in 250 words
on your answer sheet.


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It is often argued that it is more advantageous to choose a job with high wage, even if it doesn't appeal to you at all. I completely disagree with this opinion and think that job satisfaction is much more important than salary.

First of all, I believe that job satisfaction gives people a sense of fulfillment that no money can guarantee. Even if someone is earning a high salary, but feels tensed and compromises with his conscience, this person won’t enjoy his life. While pursuing one’s interests will always bring pleasure and feeling of satisfaction. For example, a lot of famous researchers made their career choices not because of appealing wages, but because they were passionate about science. That’s why it’s more important to choose the kind of work that makes you happy than to look only at a high salary.

Secondly, doing what you like keeps you motivated and therefore leads to a career growth. In other words, there is a strong relation between job satisfaction and productivity. People who love their jobs can easily excel in their fields of work and achieve better results than those, who put salary on the first place. For instance, Henry Miller decided to leave his everyday job despite a good wage and ventured to become a writer. And after enduring years of ups and downs he became one of the most famous and well-paid authors of the twentieth century. Thus, advantages of jobs that keep you satisfied outweigh the drawback of a low salary in a long-term perspective.

To conclude, I strongly believe that job satisfaction is more beneficial than high salary because it makes people happy and motivated.

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Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health problems. Do you agree or disagree?
#diet
#meat
#health
Consuming meat can lead to long-term illness; therefore, people are recommended to start eating a diet free of flesh. In my opinion, this is an accurate action and I agree with this initiative because people do not have the accurate knowledge of the flesh they choose to eat and even these processed foods do not have enough nutrients.

The primary reason why adopting a plant-based diet is essential is that individuals do not know the type of chicken or beef they should eat. Additionally, humans, prefer eating thighs and not breasts just because legs have more flavour to them. Sadly, non-vegetarians have no idea the amount of saturated oil contained in shawarma. The fact is that the amount of chicken souvlaki buckets being used in a small restaurant such as Pita Land in a day is not even 25% of the shawarma pail.

The second main reason is that these products do not cover all the vitamins required for the human physique. The food of vegetarians such as lentils, chickpeas and soya beans are highly rich sources of protein. Moreover, animals are fed poor-quality food which makes animals unhealthy. If these things are consumed by consumers, it affects their well-being. This is evident by not only comparing the nutrient facts mentioned on the packet of these eatable items but also it is recommended by expert doctors.

In conclusion, I wholeheartedly agree with implying a non-animal-based diet globally as this would encourage people to eat more healthy products such as salads and falafels which are far better than having red meat. Adopting such things in daily life would make gym lovers more active and fit.

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Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health problems. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is true that students tend to take a year off between finishing school and enrolling on college, this essay will discuss the perceived benefits and drawbacks of this trend.

Individuals prefer to do that for a variety of reasons, first of all, to take a rest from studying, because as you know school is so demanding, pupils have to attend classes, do homework and prepare for exams, as a result, one becomes tired to the point where he needs to take some time off. Secondly, there are various majors to study in university, thus, one must choose wisely, and for this reason, students tend to take their time before deciding on what to study in the future, the best way to do that is by consulting their parents, friends and relatives, also by looking into the business market and seeing which profession is the most demanded and for that, they take a year off. Despite the obvious appeal, there are some cons to this trend, firstly , after having 12 months’ rest it may be difficult for a student to start studying again, especially since there are specialities in college with an intense curriculum, a student will face a difficult time to recuperate his enthusiasm towards studying again.
Moreover , if a learner took the decision to have a year off, this way his graduation will be delayed in comparison to his colleagues, therefore, this could affect him badly, seeing his friends already started their careers and he is still attending classes will definitely make him less happy about the decision that he made earlier, as being said, not taking a year off would be a better decision.
To conclude, as I discussed in
this essay there are advantages and disadvantages to this trend, and eventually, it is up to everyone whether to do it or not.

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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university.
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