IELTS-CEFR with Broun🌀

With time, masks fall. And with every truth uncovered, something dear slips away.

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Bu narsa toxtab qoldi deganlar bekorlan beshtasin yebslada😂

Paperda yozganga erinyabman buyoga share qilib yozib otrishga guys xali asta sekin share qlaman.

👩‍💻 Examiner :Aziza
👩‍💻 Candidate: Hasan



📌 𝗢_𝗩_𝗘_𝗥_𝗔_𝗟_𝗟  : 7.0


📊𝗙𝗹𝘂𝗲𝗻𝗰𝘆 𝗮𝗻𝗱
             𝗰𝗼𝗵𝗲𝗿𝗲𝗻𝗰𝗲 : 7.0

📊𝗟𝗲𝘅𝗶𝗰𝗮𝗹 𝗿𝗲𝘀𝗼𝘂𝗿𝗰𝗲 :7.0w

📊𝗚𝗿𝗮𝗺𝗺𝗮𝘁𝗶𝗰𝗮𝗹
        𝗿𝗮𝗻𝗴𝗲  &   𝗮𝗰𝗰𝘂𝗿𝗮𝗰y :7.0w

📊𝗣𝗿𝗼𝗻𝘂𝗻𝗰𝗶𝗮𝘁𝗶𝗼𝗻 : 7.0(8.0)


My last speaking mock result. Really i didnt satisfy from my speach because of lack of complex grammar and a bit high level vocabluries, so that Maybe next time I will do my best and deserve band 7.5+


Guys Btw in this week Im ganna organize speqking mock so that be petient put reactions!

05.05.2025

Something new. If we get 20 reactions, then I will share it🫡

The line graph illustrates the number of three different types of crime car theft, house burglary, and street robbery in England and Wales from 1970 to 2005.

Overall, while the number of car thefts and burglaries increased significantly over the period, the incidence of street robbery remained relatively stable. Notably, car theft consistently had the highest figures throughout the timeline.

Focusing first on the number of car thefts, it started at around 0.4 million in 1970 and then rose significantly, reaching a peak of approximately 1.6 million in the mid-1990s. Following this surge, the figure experienced a steady decline, falling to about 1 million by the end of the period in 2005. Regarding house burglaries, the number began at 0.2 million, increased moderately in the following years, and then declined back to its original level by 2005, showing a relatively stable pattern over time.

In contrast, the number of street robberies was initially very low, at just 0.03 million. However, it showed a noticeable upward trend throughout the period, with small but steady increases.

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Written in 23 mins

There is a growing trend where, with modern technology, access to entertainment like games and films is available around the clock on smartphones, tablets, and computers, leading to health issues and daily distractions. However, despite these disadvantages, I firmly believe that the positive implications, particularly in terms of convinience and content variety, can significantly outweigh the negatives.

To begin with, there are several drawbacks associated with the widespread use of digital devices. One major concern is that easy access to digital entertainment may lead to overuse or even addiction. For example, many individuals spend excessive time on screens, which can reduce productivity, interfere with sleep patterns, and cause health issues such as eye strain and headaches. As a result, this behaviour can develop into a form of dependency where people feel anxious or uncomfortable when they are not using their devices. Moreover, spending too much time online can negatively affect social life and mental health. In particular, children and teenagers who engage in long hours of gaming or video streaming may become socially withdrawn and experience weakened family bonds or poor communication skills. In extreme cases, this can lead to feelings of loneliness and emotional isolation. Additionally, without adequate parental control, mobile devices may expose young users to harmful or inappropriate content. Despite these drawbacks, I believe the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. If people use mobile entertainment in moderation and manage their time well, they can enjoy the benefits without facing serious problems.

One of the main advantages is that mobile entertainment is extremely convenient. People can enjoy watching movies or playing games anywhere—while commuting, waiting in line, or during short breaks. This allows individuals to use their time more effectively and stay entertained without needing a TV or computer. As a result, mobile access makes entertainment more flexible and suitable for busy lifestyles. Another important benefit is the wide range of content available. Through streaming services and mobile apps, users can access thousands of films and games from different countries, languages, and genres. For example, platforms like YouTube, Netflix, and app stores offer both free and paid options, making entertainment affordable and easy to find. This means people are no longer limited to local content or physical media.

To conclude, although mobile access to films and games poses some risks, such as overuse and social disconnection, these are manageable with responsible use. Given its convenience and content diversity, I believe the benefits clearly outweigh the drawbacks, making this a largely positive development.

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Written in 52 mins

Films and games can be accessed at any time from mobile devices, like smartphones, tablets and laptop computers.

Do advantages outweigh disadvantage?

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The graphs present data on the number of individuals imprisoned in a European country over the period from 1911 to 2001.

Overall, while the male population increased dramatically, the number of females experienced a significant decline. Interestingly, both figures exhibited sharp fluctuations throughout the period.

Focusing first on the male population, it began at approximately 19,000 in 1911 and remained stable at that level until 1921. Thereafter, the figure dropped significantly to 10,000 by 1931, followed by a sharp rise to nearly 20,000 in 1941. Over the next three decades, the number remained relatively unchanged until 1971, after which it experienced a substantial increase to 40,000, and then a modest rise to around 46,000.

In contrast, the number of females started at about 3,100, followed by a gradual decline to around 700. Over the next two decades, it rose slightly to approximately 1,200, before showing a minimal drop to 900. However, the figure then increased steadily, reaching just below 2,000 by the year 2001.

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Written in 27 mins

The bar chart illustrates the transportation preferences among young people in four countries — the United Kingdom, the United States, France, and Italy — focusing on cars, motorcycles, and bicycles throughout the year.

Overall, cars are the most favored mode of transport among youth in the UK, the US, and Italy, whereas in France, bicycles are clearly the most preferred. Notably, motorcycles tend to be the least popular choice in nearly all countries.

Focusing first on car usage, both the United States and the United Kingdom show identical figures, with 60% of young people preferring this mode of transport. Italy records the highest proportion, at 75%, whereas France lags behind with only 40% of youth favoring cars.

Bicycles are also widely used, particularly in France, where nearly half of the young population (47%) prefer them. The UK follows with 30%, while Italy and the US report much lower figures, at just over 10% and exactly 10%, respectively.

Motorcycle usage is generally low among young people in all four countries, with the exception of the United States, where 30% opt for this mode. In contrast, France, the UK, and Italy show minimal preference, with figures of 11%, 10%, and 9% respectively.

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To be written in 26 mins✅

Guess the estimated score👇

There is a growing global trend where many individuals frequently engage in conversations about financial matters, including their income and expenses, as part of everyday communication. While this can be largely attributed to improving financial awareness and social media influences, coming with adverse remifications on our social comparison and envy, to make someone inconvinient.

To begin with, there are two main reasons for the growing trend of discussing financial matters. First and foremost, improving financial awareness has led to more people understanding the importance of budgeting, saving, and investing. For instance, many individuals now discuss their financial goals, such as saving for retirement or buying a home, in an effort to share knowledge and improve their financial literacy. However, this can result in increased comparisons, as people may begin measuring their financial success against that of others, potentially leading to feelings of inadequacy or envy. Furthermore, the influence of social media plays a significant role in shaping how financial discussions take place. Platforms like Instagram and YouTube often showcase influencers wealth, expensive purchases, and luxurious lifestyles. For example, a person might see their favorite influencer posting about a new car or vacation, which may create pressure to match such purchases, even if it is financially unsustainable. Consequently, this constant exposure can lead to feelings of insecurity, as individuals compare their financial situations to those they see online, often resulting in stress or financial strain. Hence, the combination of financial awareness and social media influences has made financial discussions more frequent but also more prone to fostering comparisons.

There are two main negative effects of frequent discussions about financial matters. Initially, such conversations can create pressure to keep up with others. When people share their income or expensive purchases, others may feel compelled to match those achievements, even if it’s financially unsustainable. For example, if someone boasts about buying a new car or going on an expensive vacation, others might feel inadequate or pressured to make similar purchases. As a result, this can lead to overspending or financial strain, as individuals prioritize appearances over their own financial stability. Additionally, these discussions can cause emotional distress and strained relationships. When people openly talk about their financial successes, others who are struggling may experience feelings of envy. As an illustration, a person who shares their high-paying job or recent promotion might make someone else feel jealous, especially if they are facing financial difficulties. Hence, this can create tension and insecurity, often leading to feelings of resentment or discomfort in social situations. Therefore, while discussions about money can promote financial awareness, they also have negative consequences, such as increased pressure to compete and emotional distress, which can harm relationships and well-being.


To conclude, although open discussions about financial matters may raise awareness and encourage better money management, they can also lead to unintended negative consequences. The pressure to keep up with others and the emotional discomfort caused by comparison and envy can damage personal well-being and social relationships. Thus, such discussions should be handled with care and consideration for others.

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It could take ages guys, I mean 55 mins. Since the first performance after a long time like just a month.

Btw, Send me task1 picture and task2 topic👇

Assalomu aleykum everyone.

Iam gonna start writing challenge in order to improve my writing skill to the next level. To be more clear, I should write one task1 and task2 everyday. I know thats challenging but we can do it. Btw if u wanna do with me write to the comment like "+1". After writing every single performance I will explain and write high level vocab and grammars. That challenge started from today.

Therefore, wish me luck😁🔥

Guys Innitially I thoutht this man will get that result earlier, I mean first one but anyway he deserved it.

Second niner in Khorezm guys🔥

In sha Allah nasib qilsin orasida bolish🙃