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Why I mentioned it? Because, I passed the mock test and the maps showed at that time. I guess, I cooked well. Additionally, I wrote for it, again. It's similar to my previous writing.

The maps show significant development in the area between 1960 and the present day. Overall, the main changes include the transformation of dining and shop facilities have been changed, while the station street and railway station have unchanged since over the years.

Looking at the details, on top of the place, four small shops, a grocery store, a butcher and a pharmacy have changed. Instead of these areas, Car parking, big supermarket and café have built. However, in the middle of the site, station street, located in the middle of the site, has remained untouched, suggesting its continued importance as a central route.

Afterwards, on the bottom site, newsstands and public telephones have been removed and replaced with a hotel and other site covered with railway station. Interestingly, while the function of the railway station has not changed, its size increased noticeably. In contrast, the dry cleaner’s state and appearance have unchanged, indicating either it continued relevance or resistance to change.

The table illustrates using water on three ways in six counties in 2003. Overall, agriculture accounted for the highest water usage in the UK while the reverse true for industrial in Austrlia.

Looking at the details, Domestic water use was the highest in Canada and Austalia. It was around 65%, and the proportions of industrial and agricultural water were nearly the same in both countries. Furthermore, the lowest figure for industrial water use was 2% in Australia, and agricultural water use was 5% in Canada. However, domestic and industrial water using the same, at 5% in the United Kingdom but the using of water on agriculture 90% in the nation.

On the other three: China, India and Japan countries used from water moderate. In China, industrial and domestic use stood at around 6-7% . Morover, the country had the second-highest agricultural usage at 87% also the consume was less 5% in India. Additionally, water usage for domestic and industrial purposes ranged from 8% to 10%. Meanwhile, the using of domestic and industrial water more double % than the nation in Japan. Although the country used 66% water on agricultural in 2003.

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The pie charts compare the percentage of bilingual students in the UK who could speak languages other than English between 2000 and 2010.

Overall, it is evident that, apart from the unchanged sections on German, a declining trend is observed in French, while no noticeable changes occur in other language categories. Meanwhile, Spanish, another language, or other two languages collectively surged, now accounting for approximately three-fourths of the entire dataset.

Looking at the details, over the following decade from 2000 to 2010, there was a sharp rise in the percentage of British students proficient in Spanish, increasing from 30% to 35% in Spanish. The other groups, speaking French and other languages, remained stable at 15%. Meanwhile, one-fifth of all learners spoke only their native language.

According to the next graph, the second-largest group, making up 20%, consisted of speakers of various languages. The percentage of French learners dropped and became equal to that of German and bilingual speakers, each at 10%. The proportion of native English speakers steadily declined to 10% over a decade.

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The charts illustrate the average amount of budget spent on five different household items in Japan and Malaysia in 2010.
The charts compare Japan and Malaysia in terms of the average money spent on five different household items in 2010. Overall, while Japan and Malaysia spent largest amount of money on different items: other goods and services and housing, respectively while both spent the least amount on health care. The other household items took more or less the same amount of budget.

Looking at details, Japan spent the largest proportion of money on other goods and services, at 29 %, and this was 3% higher than that of Malaysia on the same item. Meanwhile, housing was the largest spent item in Malaysia with 34% whilst Japan spent 21% of the total on the goods. However, both countries allocated the least proportion on the same sector – health care.

The other two items – transport and food - took moderate amount of the budget. Japan and Malaysia spent almost the same amount on food, 24% and 27% , respectively. Conversely, Japan spent twice as much money on transport as Malaysia did.

The line graph illustrates the number of weekly hospital admissions in FortSmith, Adlin, Stanton, Bartley and Oxley, which are hospitals in a European country, between 2004 and 2018.

Overall, for most of the period given, Bartley had the most admissions, while Stanton had the least. Oxley was the only hospital to see a decline in admissions and FortSmith was unique in that its admission figures remained relatively stable over the period. Admissions increased in all hospitals except Oxley, which saw a decline over the given period.

Admissions to Oxley Hospital started at just under 2,050 a week in 2004 but fell by more than half by the final year, reaching just over 100 admissions. FortSmith’s weekly hospital admissions fluctuated at around 200 for the whole period.

On the other hand, the number of people admitted to Adlin Hospital rose dramatically from just over 100 in the first year to 250 by 2018. Likewise, Bartley also saw a rise from 200 to peak at over 250, the highest for any hospital.  As for Stanton Hospital, only approximately 70 people were admitted in 2008, and this number gradually climbed to slightly above 150 in 2018.

In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In some nations, few people earn too high salary and some people think, it is good development. Although other individuals do not think about this trend being positive, additionally, they want to remove these occasions. I believe, high salary among employees should be useful for any governments around the world.

According to statistics, those who earn high salary are government workers. These days, it is becoming increasingly common for employees to finding jobs. Because, there are many modern jobs lead to a high salary for workers. Especially, IT programmer, SMM manager, and influencers. Another benefit is for government whether employees can earn high salary government would be increase throughout wealthy population, many travels among individuals also might be improve of rates at some statistics.

However, other people think, governments should make several permissions for earning high salary employees. The cause of these point, some employers may worry that the high-salary employees will leave for even better-paying opportunities, making their investment in hiring and training less worthwhile. Another point is involved the budget limitation. Governments might face with budget issues by over payment to government workers. It consists of scientists, security employees and other type of vital jobs. While, Government can pass to businessman for provide in some workers. IN my opinion, the governments had better set a limit for any salary.

In conclusion, Generally, employees can earn money high by their jobs but their negative effect is reducing other workers or decrease of salary in some types of jobs. As a result, most people suffer from it.

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Task 2

Some countries have come to rely on tourism as their major source of income. However, many people believe that the problems caused by tourism are more serious than those it solved.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some nations have become heavily dependent on tourism as their primary economic source. However, many argue that the issues created by tourism are more significant than the benefits it brings. As a result, I totally agree to this statement.

To begin with, tourism has several disadvantages. Why do many people believe that tourism causes challenges? I have many causes. For example, many people have problems when they go to the other counties. Firstly, poor services are common for individuals by travel. Another issue is extremely high prices. Most people want to go far places but they cannot fly because of prices. I think, Governments had better use cheaper prices. This is because it discourages people from choosing air travel. Far areas might be popular and they dream of individuals. For instance, The USA, The UK and Korea or Switzerland. As a result, these causes make loss of trust to travels and tour companies.

In my opinion, tourism continues to grow worldwide, despite some challenges. Furthermore, online purchase among some apps. It leads to faster buying tickets than offline among individuals. Additionally, it prevents having wait lines, difficulties purchasing as fake places. Another key benefit is employment opportunities. It provides jobs in various sectors such as hospitality, transport and entertainments. Generally, these benefits inspired me for agreeing.

In Conclusion, most people have problems on travel in spite of they are going to abroad. People can trace key point such as complaint to the government, it is not dramatic problem. I think, tourism is the best way to start the businesses. Nowadays, it is becoming popular between tour companies and people should take advantage of this opportunity.

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Task 2

Nowadays it is easy to apply for and be given a credit card. However, some people experience problems when they are not be able to pay their debts back.

In your opinion, do the advantages of credit cards outweigh the disadvantages?

It is all too easy to obtain a credit card and accumulate debts that are difficult to repay. Although this trend has some disadvantages like overspending and debt accumulation, I believe that the advantages, such as purchase protection and building a credit score, outweigh the negative effects.

These days, it is increasingly common for people to struggle with repaying their debts. Credit cards have significant drawbacks. One major concern is the risk of overspending beyond what users can afford. Additionally, they might face difficulties in paying off their balance on time. Furthermore, this can lead to debt accumulation and a loss of trust between customers and banks. Moreover, credit cards often come with hidden fees, such as annual charges and foreign transaction costs, making them more expensive than expected.

One of the biggest advantages of credit cards is their ease of use. Unlike cash, which can be lost or stolen, credit cards offer a secure way to make payments. They are widely accepted both online and in physical stores, allowing users to make purchases without carrying large amounts of money. Additionally, some department stores offer discounts and cashback rewards for using credit cards, increasing their financial benefits. Another key benefit is the ability to build a good credit history. When people use their credit cards responsibly by paying bills on time and keeping balances low, they improve their credit scores. This is beneficial for obtaining loans, renting a home, or even securing better job opportunities.

In conclusion, credit cards offer many benefits, including convenience, rewards, and other opportunities. To avoid financial difficulties, users must manage their spending and stay informed about the terms and conditions of their credit cards.

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