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The first chart provides data on the number of train travelers over a 9-year period, starting from 2000, whereas the second chart demonstrates the proportion of trains running on time and on standard line over the same period given.

Overall, it is clear from the former graph that the number of train passengers fluctuated mildly throughout the period studied. As for the latter graph, while the percentage of trains running on time generally increased over the span covered, that for the standard line remained stable within that timeframe.

Looking at the first graph, initially, the number of train commuters was just below 40 billion, thereafter which the figure started to increase, fluctuating at around between 50 and 40 billions of passengers from 2001 till 2008 before finishing at about 45 billion.

Regarding the second graph, the proportion of punctual trains was 92% at the beginning, whilst the figure for standard line was a bit higher, at 95%. After that, the former saw a noticeable rise to 96% in the middle of the period prior to nose-diving to 92% in 2006 and again increasing steeply to 97% at the end. On the contrary, the figure for the latter stabilized at 95% during the whole period studied.



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PIRAMID | Teacher Ozod dan repost
#RESULTS #EIGHT #ALHAMDULILLAH
#2024 IDP CDI 27/OCTOBER/2024

LOOK AT THAT IMPRESSIVE 8.0!!!!!

- Isn't it bizarre that we need to fail more in order to succeed more ?

- coz failure and success are deeply intertwined, with the former being a crucial step on the path to the latter. It is called the paradox of failure!

Kamron, my former student and a proud member of PIRAMID is a real sample! He finally did it, proved what he can do!

KAMRON is big into personal growth and learning and on educational growth. He proved his excellence in English.

He is gonna be setting off his IELTS program in PIRAMID!


The bar graph shows both natality and mortality rates in Switzerland over a 45-year period, starting from 1975.

Generally speaking, while the number of births increased significantly over the period studied, the figure for deaths decreased slowly after experiencing an upward trend from 1975 till 1995. Additionally, throughout the period surveyed, birth rates were comparatively higher than the number of deaths, except for the year 1985, in which slightly more deaths were registered.

Regarding the birth rates, initially, there were 1.2 millions of births, the figure which remained stable at this level until 1985. Following this, natality rates started to soar, reaching an all-time high of about 3.2 million at the end of the given period.

As far as the death rates are concerned, the patterns of change varied. In 1975 alone, there were exactly 1 million of dead people, thereafter which the figure rose and peaked at 1.5 million within two decades prior to witnessing a noticeable drop to approximately 0.8 million at the end.


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Question: Some people believe that now is the best time to live in human history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Advancements made in technology, education and healthcare systems have enabled many people to enjoy their lives to the fullest compared to the previous eras. People, therefore, argue that living in the current age is more preferable than the past. I personally agree with this viewpoint for several reasons.

To begin with, in recent decades technological developments have paved the way for making groundbreaking discoveries, like smart phones, solar panels or electric cars. These inventions play an essential part in modern people’s lives, as they are of utmost assistance in their day-to-day lives. For example, individuals, these days, use their smart phones daily to accomplish important tasks, ranging from arranging business meetings to contacting with near and dear ones which was almost impossible to do in the past.

Furthermore, education systems have also seen significant developments. To be more precise, current education systems in schools and universities are largely different than those in the past. This is because we no longer use diaries or journals to assess students’ performance, since we do it on online platforms with the help of laptops or hand-held devices.

Last but not least, medical advances have also been unprecedented. The reason for this is that breakthroughs in the field of medicine have helped thousands of patients to recover from their illnesses or find remedies for incurable diseases like cancers or diabetes.

To conclude, I am still of the view that we are living in the best age of mankind history because of positive changes made in technology, education and healthcare.


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The given table provides data on the consumption of water by three different sectors in six various nations in the year 2003.

Overall, throughout the period studied, while the largest percentage of water was utilized by domestic purposes in Canada and Australia, the other four countries used the highest proportion of water for agriculture. In contrast, the use of water in industrial purposes constituted the smallest figures in all countries listed, except for Canada.

Focusing on European countries frist, the percentages of water used by households in Australia and Canada were 65% and 63% respectively, whereas the figure for the UK was a tiny 5%. Conversely, the UK was a leading country in water utilization for agriculture with a hefty 90%, yet the figures for Australia and Canada accounted for a third and one in twenty of total water use. For industrial purposes, however, the proportion of water consumption by Canada was far higher than the other two states, at 32% (Canada) compared to 5% (the UK) and 2% (Australia).

As for Asian countries, China was a top user of water for agricultural grounds, with a staggering 87%, closely as well as distantly followed by India and Japan, at 82% and 66% respectively. For the other two sectors, such as domestic and industrial, the share of water use was just below 20% in all three states
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PIRAMID | Teacher Ozod dan repost
#CEFR #MULTILEVEL #results

Congrats Durdona on achieving B2. Durdona was fairly confident to her language skills and used to accomplish all of her home assignments fully on time. And here you are her result, hard-work finally paid-off!!!

Teachers:

Botir Atoev
Ozod Asadov

Come to PIRAMID - PIRAMID ga kel !


PIRAMID | Teacher Ozod dan repost
#results #sixpointfive #alhamdulillah #2024 IDP PBI 28/September/2024
Age: 16 👀
Attempt: 1

Umida, a true evidence of honesty and diligence, attained a breathtaking score of 6.5 🔥. She was a punctual student, enjoyed the IELTS journey with PIRAMID team. Despite the fact that she had no more time left for her English journey, she nailed it. ⚡️

Wish you all the best ⚡️, Umida. We're happy for your amazing score at such a young age. This is just the beginning.

Teachers:

Ozod Asadov
Olimjon Uvayzov
Munisa Asadova

Come to PIRAMID - PIRAMID ga Kel !


PIRAMID | Teacher Ozod dan repost
#results #seven #alhamdulillah #2024 IDP PBI 28/September/2024
Age: 15 👀
Attempt: 1

Muhammadjon, one of the hardworking students we had, achieved a considerable score of 7.0 🔥. He used to be ready for all our classes, and he was an attention-to-detail student during the classes conducted by our teachers - Mr Ozod, Olimjon & Ms Munisa.

Wish you all the best ⚡️, Muhammadjon. We're happy for your amazing score at such a young age.

Teachers:

Ozod Asadov
Olimjon Uvayzov
Munisa Asadova

Come to PIRAMID - PIRAMID ga Kel !


Recent advances in technology have enabled many people to go online and seek help for different purposes, especially in medical grounds. This tendency, however, has resulted in seldom visits to medical professionals. While there are some reasons why this is happening, I personally believe that it is a change for the worse.

There are a couple of primary factors why an increasing number of individuals are seeking medical aid on the internet. One of them has to do with convenience, meaning that patients no longer need to wait in long lines for clinical check-ups. Instead, they can go online and search for various recommendations or treatments which fit their conditions. Another major factor is associated with a wide array of information about particular medicines and cures, not to mention them to be complimentary. To be specific, one can find a plethora of data on a certain medical problem at no cost which is a big plus for those who are needy.

Positive as it may seem, I, on the whole, view this trend to be a negative one for two chief reasons. The first and most essential one is that treatments or prescriptions received online cannot be reliable. This is because there are a myriad of online scams which tend to make people go astray by diagnosing a wrong treatment. This, in turn, can have a detrimental impact on their health. A further negative consequence of seeking medicinal assistance online is that they are not as effective as visiting doctors in-person. The reason for this is that unlike online diagnosis and treatments, consultations given by physicians tend to be effective and monitored regularly to ensure patients are making improvements in their health. But it is an extremely rare case to experience such a condition online.

To conclude, the reasons why many people are prone to receiving medical help from different online platforms are twofold, yet I am still of the opinion that this turn of events is undesirable because of internet frauds and ineffectiveness of online remedies.


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🎟 TASK 2:
Some people today prefer to get advice online for medical problems and do not want to visit a doctor. Why is this? Is this a positive or a negative development?


There is a view that the ultimate motive behind people’s hard-working attitude is to make more money. While there is some truth to this perception, I believe that there are also some factors which are equally essential to work hard.

On the one hand, it is indeed true that some individuals tend to put lots of efforts to make a living so as to fulfill their family expectations. To be specific, more and more people, these days, are occupied with tight work schedules in order to meet their needs, meaning that they often work from dawn to dusk to make a financial profit.

On the other hand, there are some people who work harder in order to move up their career ladder. For them, personal development is more important than money-making. This is because they believe in the idea of ‘’No pain, no gain’’, thus working hard and making strides are of supreme importance in their lives.

Another, albeit equally critical, factor to exert effort is closely linked to people’s desire and enthusiasm. To illustrate, many individuals work as hard as they can, since they have a passion for doing this as if working hard has already become part and parcel of their lives. Japanese people can be a good case in point, for they have a tendency to strive just because of their interests towards their occupations.

In summary, even though I admit that the reason why many people work hard is to make financial gains, I am still of the view that hard-working is also associated with people’s self-growth and enjoyment.


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The extinction of some animals has become a natural phenomenon in recent years. Some people therefore believe that they should not do anything to cease this from occurring. I personally disagree with this viewpoint for three main factors.

One clear reason why humans ought to protect animal species from vanishing is linked to experimentation. This is because some animals like rats and rabbits are often used for experimental purposes to test the relevance of vaccines or drugs to mankind. To illustrate, before prescribing medicines to people, they are tested to different animal creatures for safety grounds. Covid-19 pandemic can be a good case in point, in which some animal species are experimented with various doses of vaccines.

Another, albeit equally important, reason why we should preserve animals from extinction is that they act as a source of food to one another. Take deer and zebras as an example. Almost all carnivorous animals prey on them to feed themselves and their families. Unless people attempt to save the lives of animal species which are being endangered, the chances are that other creatures (mainly carnivorous ones) may also become extinct.

Last but not least, human beings should be in charge of keeping every type of animal species alive, as each of them is unique and has an ability to entertain people of all ages. For example, koalas and kangaroos are on the verge of extinction, since they can be found only in the territory of Australia. In order to preserve their species, I think people should shoulder the responsibility of placing them in their artificial habitats or zoos which, in turn, can assist in entertaining people.

All in all, the disappearance of animal species indeed occurs by nature. However, I argue that we, as humans, should be responsible for protecting them, for they are useful in research, entertainment and food chain.


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The three pie charts demonstrate the percentages of new cars which were sold in Australia over a 19- year period, starting from the year 1994.

Overall, throughout the period studied, the sales of sedans comprised by far the largest proportions, whereas the reverse was true for SUV cars. Additionally, while the proportional sales of SUV cars and others increased noticeably over the span covered, the figure for sedans decreased markedly. In total, however, the number of cars almost doubled from 1994 to 2013.

In 1994, the proportion of sedans - the highest percentage ever recorded - accounted for a staggering 74% of sales, whereas the figure for SUVs was a tiny 7%. In stark contrast, the percentage of sales of others was around a fifth.

After a decade, however, while the share of sedan sales declined to 62%, the figures for SUVs and others rose to 17% and 21% respectively.

By 2013, the proportion of sedan cars had experienced an 11-percent drop in its sales, yet the figure for others had risen to about a third. Meanwhile, the sale of SUV cars had remained stable at 17%. On the whole, the quantity of total car sales increased practically two-fold from 42,000 to 85,000 between 1994 and 2013.


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The line graph shows how many participants there were in five different activities from 2000 to 2020.

Overall, even though film club saw a temporary fall in its participation number, it managed to attract an overwhelming majority of attendees throughout the whole period. Additionally, while the numbers of participants in table tennis as well as musical performances increased, the reverse was true for amateur dramatics. The figure for martial arts, in contrast, remained more or less the same during the period given.

Film club – the most popular activity – appealed to about 65 individuals in 2000, after which the figure declined slightly to 60 participants in 2010 before rebounding to its initial figure (65) in the end. Conversely, martial arts started the period with around 37 participants, followed by a minimal rise to 40 in the middle of the year and closed the study list with roughly 37 members after experiencing a slight drop.

The most significant changes took place in the quantities of partakers in amateur dramatics, musical performances and table tennis, however. Initially, approximately 25 people participated in amateur dramatics, after that the figure decreased steeply to just under 10 in the year 2020. In stark contrast, while the number of participants in table tennis rose from about 18 to just over 50 between 2000 and 2020, the participation rate for musical performances began from the year 2005, witnessing an uninterrupted increase in its number to 20 till 2020.


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