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It is undeniable that educating children properly is of great importance. However, they are believed to learn more efficiently from playing independently compared to attending extra-curricular activities after school. Despite the fact that playing freely is also effective since it is done voluntarily, I tend to disagree more with this statement, because courses designed and planned by professional adults have clear goals.
It has been suggested that the reason why approach to learning is an efficient one boils down to the fact that children commit themselves to games they want to explore out of their free will, meaning no one has to force them into doing something for an extended period of time. Provided that they are content with how they spend their time, they will be more open to learning , exploring new things and even putting themselves at risky situations , as they are really interested in, ergo invested in the process of their learning experience. Case in point, allowing children to choose what to do in their free time leads them to spend more time outdoors, make new friends, learn new games and become competitive because of unintentional pressure from their peers.
On the flip side, many others have claimed that it is surely a better decision to leave the academic and mental progress of the young generation in the hands of trained and qualified professionals. It is not a secret that kids like playing , but they do not know what is useful , let alone best for them , which is why it is vitally important for them to adults who have created step-by-step projects or lesson plans with a sole purpose , that is to ensure children are taught effectively in a certain amount of time rather than wasting their childhood and lack behind that other kids who are more talented or academically inclined which is a good opposition to put forward and reject the idea that kids are better off on their own.
It is said that playing freely lets children learn more so than they would if they were enrolled in after school activities by their school. It can be concluded that I disagree more with this notion due to there is more supervision in organized activities.
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It is undeniable that educating children properly is of great importance. However, they are believed to learn more efficiently from playing independently compared to attending extra-curricular activities after school. Despite the fact that playing freely is also effective since it is done voluntarily, I tend to disagree more with this statement, because courses designed and planned by professional adults have clear goals.
It has been suggested that the reason why approach to learning is an efficient one boils down to the fact that children commit themselves to games they want to explore out of their free will, meaning no one has to force them into doing something for an extended period of time. Provided that they are content with how they spend their time, they will be more open to learning , exploring new things and even putting themselves at risky situations , as they are really interested in, ergo invested in the process of their learning experience. Case in point, allowing children to choose what to do in their free time leads them to spend more time outdoors, make new friends, learn new games and become competitive because of unintentional pressure from their peers.
On the flip side, many others have claimed that it is surely a better decision to leave the academic and mental progress of the young generation in the hands of trained and qualified professionals. It is not a secret that kids like playing , but they do not know what is useful , let alone best for them , which is why it is vitally important for them to adults who have created step-by-step projects or lesson plans with a sole purpose , that is to ensure children are taught effectively in a certain amount of time rather than wasting their childhood and lack behind that other kids who are more talented or academically inclined which is a good opposition to put forward and reject the idea that kids are better off on their own.
It is said that playing freely lets children learn more so than they would if they were enrolled in after school activities by their school. It can be concluded that I disagree more with this notion due to there is more supervision in organized activities.
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#classworksample
#writinghelp
@teachershermuhammad8_5