In our online writing intensive course yesterday, we discussed the use of fake statistics in IELTS essays. Here’s the key takeaway: any statistics you include—whether real or fake—tends to sound fake to the examiner.

For instance:
"According to statistics, 58% of people who consume fast food regularly become obese within three years."

While the examiners won’t fact-check your numbers, common sense tells them it’s unlikely that students can recall precise statistics under exam pressure. As a result, such claims often appear fabricated, which can your essay less credible.

So, what’s the solution?
Avoid using specific numbers altogether. Instead, focus on presenting the general idea. For example:
"Many studies have linked regular fast food consumption to a range of health issues, such as obesity."

This approach is just as effective and sounds much more natural and believable.
Remember, your goal is to present a well-argued essay, not to impress with precise data.

Can you rephrase this fake sounding statistics to make it more natural:

"According to recent research, 72% of people who drink sugary beverages daily develop diabetes within five years."


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