IELTS | Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev


Гео и язык канала: Узбекистан, Английский
Категория: Курсы и гайды


Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev 3-yillik tajribaga IELTS INSTRUCTOR
,,Suhrob Academy" (online school) asoschisi
2500 dan ziyod shogirdlar chiqargan
IELTS 8.5
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Узбекистан, Английский
Категория
Курсы и гайды
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Репост из: IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
Who wants a FREE General English Course?

🥇Master 20 complex structures for S and W
🥈Activate collocations, topic-based vocab, phrasal verbs
🥉Analyse daily articles and videos

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Репост из: IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
🔥A BAND 9.0 INTRODUCTION🔥

The modern world + trend + where


In a world characterized by technological advancements and internet resources, it has become increasingly common for individuals to conduct financial transactions through virtual means, particularly in urban areas. While this trend poses serious risks to personal security, I believe that it brings much greater benefits in terms of convenience and environmental sustainability.

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Репост из: IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
Ertaga 4 soat Reading analysis?

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Репост из: IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
🥇WRITING 7.5
🥈SPEAKING 7.5

💯At this point, nobody can stop my students from crushing the test!


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Репост из: IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
The difference between 7.0 and 8.0!

There are several benefits to walking. First and foremost, it improves physical health. Mainly because, walkers burn sufficient calories, strengthen their muscles, and enhance their immune systems. As a result, they can maintain a healthy weight and stay away from chronic diseases like obesity. Consequently, their physical fitness and overall quality of life get better.


🥇Coherence and cohesion:

Referencing ✅ [ it, this, their, they ]
A central topic ✅ [ The impact of walking on physical health ]
Paraphrasing ✅ [ walking and walkers ]
Logical sequencing ✅ [ logical flow of ideas ]
Cohesive devices ❌ [ Overuse of linkers like "first", "mainly because", "as a result", and "consequently" ]

🥈Grammar range and accuracy:

No errors in punctuation and grammar ✅
A wide range of structures ❌ [ only simple sentence forms ]
Flexibility ❌ [ only basic use of common structures ]

There are several benefits to walking. When people integrate daily walks into their schedules, they can not only burn sufficient calories and strengthen their muscles but also boost their immune systems and cardiovascular health. Such improvements can ultimately mitigate the risk of chronic health conditions like obesity, enhancing physical fitness and overall quality of life in the process. In a world dominated by sedentary lifestyles due to technological advances and busy lifestyles, walking can make a big difference in maintaining a healthy weight and staying in shape.


🥇Coherence and cohesion:

Referencing ✅ [ they, their, such ]
Paraphrasing ✅ [ walking, daily walks, improve, improvements ]
Cohesive devices ✅ [ linkers do not attract attention ]
A central topic ✅ [ the impact of walking on physical health ]
Logical sequencing ✅ [ smooth flow of ideas ]

🥈Grammar range and accuracy:

No errors in punctuation and grammar ✅
A wide range of structures ✅ [ simple, complex, and uncommon ]
Flexibility ✅ [ The use of "In a world dominated by" ]

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Репост из: IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
🥇Writing marathon uchun hammaga link yuborildi.

🥈Kimdir to'lov qilgan bo'la turib link olmagan bo'lsa yozsin, tashlab qoyamiz link.

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Репост из: IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
✔️Life is like a video game!

🤔How I manage to work hard without getting stressed out.

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Репост из: IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
Ayrimlar meni kurslarimda faqat structure urgatiladi degan emish!

🥇Men natijaga kafolat beradigan yagona o'qituvchiman. Agar men o'tadigan darslar zarracha bo'lsa ham foydasiz bo'lganda kafolat berolmasdim.

🥈Writing kursimda ham Speaking kursimda ham har qanday kursdagidan ko'proq vocabulary urganasiz.

🥉Writing kursimda ham Speaking kursimda ham har qanday kursdagidan ko'proq idea urganasiz.

🏅Writing kursimda ham Speaking kursimda ham har qanday kursdagidan ko'proq grammar urganasiz.

✅ Agar IELTS muloqot qilish qobiliyatini baholasa, va muloqot qilish qobiliyati sizni qancha so'zdan, structuredan, va ideadan foydalana olishingizni bildirsa demak meni kurslarimda keraksiz narsa yo'q. Shuning uchun ham har bir kursimda allaqachon IELTS dan 7.0 7.5 8.0 olib bo'lganlar ham to'xtovsiz qatnashib kelyapdi, demak nimanidir tug'ri urgatyapman.

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Репост из: IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
‼️Writing Marathon uchun qabul tugadi‼️

✅To'lov qilganlar ertaga sizlar uchun guruh linki tashlanadi. 200 kishi qabul qilindi. Bundan keyingi Writing kurslar 400 mingdan Noyabrni o'rtasida ochiladi!

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Репост из: IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
Vocab and ideas in IELTS Writing and Speaking

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Репост из: IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
Which sentence is wrong and why?
Опрос
  •   Extraverts find it easy to strike up conversations and break the ice.
  •   Extraverts find it easy to make friends and forge relationships.
  •   Extraverts bottle up their emotions and withdraw from social gatherings.
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Репост из: IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
People have different views as to whether free libraries should be constructed in towns or if such initiatives are a waste of resources given the accessibility of information online. While the financial implications of building free libraries cannot be overlooked, I believe that investing in these institutions is vital for societal development.


Critics of free library construction cite various reasons to support their stance. If countries choose to put this idea into practice, they have to cover substantial expenses associated with sourcing sustainable construction materials, employing specialized labor, and maintaining these facilities. Such financial commitments could detract from funding essential public services like schools and hospitals, ultimately diminishing residents' quality of life. This concern is particularly pronounced in developing countries, where citizens already struggle with poor public service performance and substandard living conditions. Considering the widespread availability of digital resources like archived newspapers, audio recordings, academic journals, and online textbooks, diverting funds to libraries may jeopardize a nation's economic stability and investment capacity.


Despite these valid concerns, in my view, the establishment of free libraries is crucial. By creating accessible spaces dedicated to reading and learning, governments can inspire individuals to integrate reading into their daily lives. With the help of reading clubs, workshops, and community events, libraries are likely to foster a culture of literacy that enhances critical-thinking and problem-solving skills. While the internet serves as a valuable tool for information retrieval, it usually functions as a platform for social interaction and personal recreation rather than a primary source of knowledge acquisition.


In conclusion, while the financial burden of establishing free libraries is considerable, I advocate for this initiative due to its potential effects on literacy and learning. Investing in such facilities not only enriches individual lives but also strengthens the fabric of society as a whole.


Suhrobjon Abdivaliyev
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Репост из: IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
📝IELTS WRITING TASK 2!

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Репост из: IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
✔️Falastine haqida 12 yoshimda she'r yozgan edim, o'sha she'rni tugashi mana shu. O'sha vaqti "Shukrona" nomli rasmiy kitobim chiqqan edi, lekin afsuski asosiy she'rlarimga ruxsat berilmasdan, 8 yoshlarimda yozgan be'mani she'rlarim chop etilgandi.

📝 Oxirgi uch yilda bironta ham she'r yozmadim, sababi chuqur o'ylanishga vaqtim bo'lmadi. O'tirib kitob o'qishdan, she'r yozishdan ko'ra harakat qilishni boshladim, o'z ustimda ishlashni boshladim. Har bir jihatimni sayqallamoqchiman, bu kibrli, odamovi, zaif Suhrobni san'at asariga aylantirmoqchiman, san'atkori xoxlaganidek san'at asariga.

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Репост из: IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
#I_lost_faith_in_myself

Azobingni sezdim men,
Singan, ko'ngli xolsizman.
Oyoq, qo'limda kishan,
Gavjum joyda yolg'izman.


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Репост из: IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
🥇I am stupid because I offer irreplaceable courses at a low price.

🥈You are stupid because you do not capitalize on my stupidity.

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Репост из: IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
Can't sleep, I reach out to ChatGPT-bonu😁

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