BAFOYEV'S IELTS | 8.5

From 1 to 9? IELTS Task 1 understanding?

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Writing Task 1 bo'yicha bir kurscha tashkil qilamizmi?

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Ruchkani yo'qotmasdan, pastasini oxirigacha yozgan o'quvchilar! O'qituvchi sifatida sizlarni juda ham hurmat qilaman!

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O'quvchilarimning ba'zilariga Task 2 siga 5 yoki 5.5 qo'ysam, yaxshiroq bal olish uchun murakkab insho strukturalarni o'rganib, yozishmoqchi bo'lishadi. 5 yoki 5.5 olishning asosiy sababi struktura emas balkim:

- there are debates amoung the society
❌spelling xato
❌word choice xato
- development is one of many aspect
❌verb xato
- This is a one solution
❌repeat qilingan
- The cause to overpopulation is
❌preposition xato

ga o'xshash mayda-chuyda xatolar ko'p ekanligidan.

Essay yozishda murakkablik, oddiylikni to'liq o'zlashtirishdan boshlanadi.

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Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

The fact that childcare is of paramount importance in society has led many to advocate mandatory parenting courses for mothers and fathers. Proponents believe such initiatives help individuals become better parents. While these courses can enhance childcare awareness, I believe there is no universally applicable parenting method that can be effectively taught. Instead, governments could benefit more by establishing local parenting consultation centers.

Parenting classes can be valuable in teaching parents general principles of childcare. For instance, these courses often introduce parenting techniques that have been widely effective in promoting children's well-being. Through such training, not only do parents gain insights into children's psychological and physical needs but also learn about legal frameworks related to parenting. For example, a father might understand the negative long-term consequences of corporal punishment on a child's mental and physical health.

However, making these courses mandatory may not be a wise approach. As both a teacher and a father, I have observed that every child is unique, requiring personalized care and attention. One significant risk of parenting classes is the potential for overparenting and excessive control. Parents who take these courses may become overly cautious, turning what is supposed to be an effective parenting into detrimental micromanagement. This can lead to "spoon-feeding," a term used to describe a parenting style where children are denied the opportunity to develop autonomy due to excessive parental involvement.

Therefore, if increasing the number of good parents is the eventual target, I believe governments should focus on creating local childcare support centers. These centers would be more effective than compulsory courses because they would provide personalized advice tailored to each child's specific developmental needs. For example, childcare consultants could assess children’s cognitive and physical development and offer targeted recommendations to parents. Should parents require guidance on certain aspects of raising their children, these centers could provide one-on-one consultations, ensuring the advice is practical and relevant.

In conclusion, while parenting courses can provide general knowledge, requiring all parents to attend them is not an ideal solution. Establishing local consultation centers would be a more effective approach, as they focus on individual children and their unique needs rather than offering generalized advice. Parenting is an intricate process that requires understanding a child's distinct characteristics, which cannot be achieved through a one-size-fits-all approach.

Wordcount: 380
Time spent: FOREVER
Approximate band score: 7.5
(LR: 8.0 GR: 7.0 CC: 8.0 TR: 7.0)
❕I have used ChatGpt to paraphrase a few phrases
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