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...Unlocking the Lexical Vault: Key Phrases & Advanced Vocab

Here are the phrases that elevate this essay to Band 8+, along with why they work and how you can use them.

(Each item below should be clearly separated and visually appealing)

• "Characterized by...":
• Why It's Gold: A sophisticated way to define or describe something. Shows strong command of academic language.
• Power Usage: "The 21st century is characterized by rapid technological advancements."
• "Limited or even no access":
• Why It's Gold: Adds emphasis and precision. Grabs the reader's attention.
• Power Usage: "Many students have limited or even no access to quality education."
• "In my view, this is a negative development":
• Why It's Gold: Clear, direct opinion statement. Crucial for Task 2.
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Power Usage: "In my view, this is a positive step towards a more sustainable future."
• "City inhabitants' health":
• Why It's Gold: Specific and academic. Avoids vague terms like "people."
• Power Usage: "Air pollution poses a significant threat to city inhabitants' health."
• "Struggle to find...":
• Why It's Gold: Highlights a challenge or difficulty.
• Power Usage: "Many graduates struggle to find meaningful employment."
• "Crucial to ensure one's own well-being":
• Why It's Gold: Formal, impactful, and shows an understanding of cause and effect.
• Power Usage: "A balanced diet is crucial to ensure one's own well-being."
• "Particularly problematic these days":
• Why It's Gold: Demonstrates awareness of contemporary issues.
• Power Usage: "The rising cost of living is particularly problematic these days."
• "Further exacerbate the problem":
• Why It's Gold: High-level vocabulary. "Exacerbate" means "to make worse."
• Power Usage: "Ignoring climate change will only further exacerbate the problem."
• "Potential for weakened social cohesion":
• Why It's Gold: Combines abstract concepts with precision.
• Power Usage: "Increased inequality has the potential for weakened social cohesion."
• "Boosts a sense of community significantly":
• Why It's Gold: Uses a strong verb ("boosts") and quantifier ("significantly").
• Power Usage: "Volunteering boosts a sense of community significantly."
• "Correlated to worsened environmental conditions":
• Why It's Gold: Shows cause-and-effect relationships with sophisticated language.
• Power Usage: "Deforestation is correlated to worsened environmental conditions."
• "Escalate environmental problems":
• Why It's Gold: A powerful verb meaning "to increase rapidly."
• Power Usage: "Ignoring these issues will only escalate environmental problems."
• "Serious consequences in many aspects of life":
• Why It's Gold: Summarizes the impact in a strong and impactful way.
• Power Usage: "Lack of education has serious consequences in many aspects of life."
• "Makes me firmly believe":
• Why It's Gold: Confident and decisive expression of opinion.
• Power Usage: "The evidence makes me firmly believe that this policy is flawed."
• "Most concerning ones":
• Why It's Gold: Strong concluding statement.
• Power Usage: "The ethical implications are the most concerning ones."

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TOPIC: More and more people in the city live in homes with small or no outdoor areas. Do you think it is a negative or positive development?

Urban environments are characterized by compact urban planning, where an increasing number of urban dwellers have limited or even no access to outdoor spaces. In my view, this is a negative development for several reasons.

The first problem of urban density can be seen in city inhabitants’ health. As their access to outdoor areas is limited, people in cities may struggle to find places where they can engage in physical activities, crucial to ensure one’s own well-being. This can be particularly problematic these days, since with the increasing consumption of sugary products, people are facing health issues such as obesity. Therefore, if outdoor areas to do physical exercises become limited, this may further exacerbate the problem of experiencing health issues in cities.

The second issue caused by compact urban housing is the potential for weakened social cohesion. Community centers—a part of outdoor spaces—usually play an important role in uniting people in each community. This is because cultural practices and traditional festivals are often carried out in these places, as is the case in Uzbekistan. In this country, people gather in community centers to celebrate traditional festivals, like Nowruz, which boosts a sense of community significantly. This explains how having limited outdoor places may affect social unity negatively.

 Another negative effect of urban density can be correlated to worsened environmental conditions in cities. Green areas in urban areas are considered the main source of oxygen for urban dwellers in the world of concrete buildings, many factories, and an endless number of cars, most of which even release carbon dioxide. Hence, since the word “limited outdoor areas” can mean “limited green spaces,” we can conclude that urban density may escalate environmental problems in urban areas.

In conclusion, high density in cities can have serious consequences in many aspects of life, which makes me firmly believe that compact urban housing is negative. Among this trend’s many negative impacts, its effects on city populations' physical health, societal unity, and environmental conditions in urban areas can be the most concerning ones.

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I. Urban Development & Planning

• Urban Density: Concentration of people/structures in an urban area (high = crowded, low = sparse).
• Compact Urban Planning: Promotes higher densities, mixed-use, walkable neighborhoods to minimize sprawl.
• High-Density: Large number of people/buildings in a small area.
• Rapid Urbanization: Quick increase in urban population and city expansion.
• Compact Urban Housing: Housing that fits many units into a small land footprint.
• Space Utilization: Efficient use of available space.
• Transportation Planning: Planning for movement of people/goods (roads, transit, etc.).
• Limited Land Availability: Scarcity of buildable land.

II. Economic & Social Factors

• Economic Growth: Increase in production and economic activity.
• Community Engagement: Involving community in decisions that affect them.
• Essential Services: Basic services for healthy living (healthcare, water, etc.).
• Affordable: Priced within reach of most, especially lower-income individuals.
• Lower-Income Individuals: People earning below average income.
• Urban Populations: Total number of people living in urban areas.

III. Environment & Sustainability

• Sustainable Infrastructure: Infrastructure minimizing environmental impact, maximizing efficiency.
• Ecological Footprint: Land/water area needed for consumption and waste absorption.
• Exposure to Nature: Access to and interaction with natural environments.
• Outdoor Space: Areas outside buildings for recreation/relaxation.

IV. Well-being & Health

• Mental Well-being: State of positive psychological health.
• Reduced Physical Activity: Decline in regular movement.
• Psychological Impacts: Effects on mental/emotional state.
• Motor Skill Deficits: Limitations in physical skills/coordination.
• Long-Term Health Problems: Chronic health conditions.
• Child Development: Physical, cognitive, emotional, and social growth in childhood.
• Developmental Disadvantages: Challenges in development compared to peers.

V. Social & Community Dynamics

• Community Bonds: Strength of relationships in a community.
• Social Interaction: People communicating and interacting with one another.
• Shared Gardens: Community gardens where people cultivate plants together.

VI. Action/Influence Terms

• Foster: Encourage growth or development.
• Exacerbate: Make something worse.
• Compound: Add to or combine with something else, often worsening.
• Weaken: Reduce strength or effectiveness.

VII. Other Terms

• Proximity: Closeness in space or time.
• Cultural Amenities: Places of cultural interest (museums, theaters, etc.).
• A Vibrant Urban Environment: Diverse, lively, community-rich urban area.
• Smaller Dwellings: Housing units with reduced living space.

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