Pay special attention to the underlined words in this first detailed paragraph. It is language features like these that raise your CC score to 9.0. I'm sure I've done exceptionally well in CC and met all the requirements for band 9.
Requirements of Band 9 Coherence & Cohesion: ⬇
✔ The message can be followed effortlessly.
✔ Cohesion is used in such a way that it very rarely attracts attention.
✔ Any lapses in coherence or cohesion are minimal.
✔ Paragraphing is skilfully managed.
Now you get it, right? If I hadn’t underlined those words, it would have been difficult to find them, meaning cohesion rarely attracts attention.
Requirements of Band 9 Coherence & Cohesion: ⬇
✔ The message can be followed effortlessly.
✔ Cohesion is used in such a way that it very rarely attracts attention.
✔ Any lapses in coherence or cohesion are minimal.
✔ Paragraphing is skilfully managed.
Now you get it, right? If I hadn’t underlined those words, it would have been difficult to find them, meaning cohesion rarely attracts attention.