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The two maps show the transformation of a coastal land into a coastal park.

In general, the place has become more entertainment-friendly after the development, with the introduction of a new café, woods, and car park. The only untouched part of the area was cliffs near the sea.

According to the pre-development map of the land, two farm buildings were accessible with a narrow way from the main road. To the right, agricultural lands occupied the main area, while the other side was used for animal farming ,and less than half was still unused.

During the development, a brand-new café has been erected alongside the main road, whereas the agricultural land has been replaced by trees, which were planted around a circular footpath and linked to the car park. The car park is also a part of plan, as it has been opened in the place of former farm buildings. Another circular footpath has been laid around the new mand-made lake with its kayaks. Moreover, five more trees have been planted to the west of parking lot in order to add some greenery to the overall image of the place. Lastly, a set of steps have been introduced over cliffs, making it possible for park visitors to engage in beach activities and games.


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The two maps illustrate the transformations happened to a museum and areas surrounding it in 1990 and 2010.

In general, between the given years, the area and museum experienced some considerable changes becoming more visitor-friendly with the introduction of a new park, café and enlarged shop. These alterations came at the expense of previous cottage and small garden.

In 1990, coming from the main road, a cottage occupied the left side of the narrow road to the car park. On the other side, a large garden was located, which was distinctly separated from the car park. As for the museum, it had an entrance facing the car park. To the right hand of the entrance, two separate smaller exhibition rooms were situated, next to which a restaurant alongside the main room for exhibitions occupied the main part of the museum. At the left corner, an indoor shop was serving the museum visitors. Lastly, a larger garden covered the far line of the place.

After 20 years, albeit to the sizeable garden, restaurant and car park, all other facilities saw a type of transformation. For example, the cottage was repurposed for a brand-new café, while the smaller garden by the main road had been flattened to add more parking spaces. Regarding the museum-related nuances, the shop was expanded, which resulted in the rectangular shape of the main exhibition room. Finally, a minor change of removing the wall between two rather small exhibition halls had been undertaken by 2010.



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History is regarded as one of the oldest subjects that humanity has been learning. In recent times, the community of history learners have two different views about the importance of local and world history, with the first group giving more credits to local history , while their opponents arguing that studying world history is more important. Personally, I believe that a balanced method in this process can be more beneficial than option for either one.

On the one hand, incorporating world history as a subject at educational institutions could maintain a chance for students to learn from the past. In simpler terms, youngsters can gain new insights about mistakes and achievements in the history of world countries, which may come in handy while making critical decisions in future. One clear example of global happening that almost everyone should know is World Wars and their side effects to the world, ranging from the genocide of nations to the horrifying introduction of nuclear weapons. The new generation should be aware of suchlike happenings, ensuring that they can avoid any possible conflicts.

On the other hand, the proponents of local history argue that it is possible to install sense of patriotism in students if they have more local history classes. It is linked to self-awareness - having deep knowledge about past ancestors, the development of one’s own nation and language. This familiarity has more likelihood to inspire the youth to preserve nation and rely on traditional norms on the way of improving themselves to perfection.

As for my own position, I am inclined to say that balanced-understanding of both global and local history can bring forth more advantages. This is because, the recognition of identity and how the current world has evolved may create a better environment to make well-informed decisions as an inhabitant of a country and the world.

In conclusion, despite independent importance offered by either studying local or world history, I still agree with using a combined approach in this procedure.


Some people think that students should learn the world history, but others think students should study their local history.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.


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Robotic industry is earning more and more cruciality in human life, with house chores and other tasks at workplace being completed by robots without human involvement. In my opinion, this shift has more possibly positive sides than its negatives.

On the one hand, there is a commonly held concern related to robots and the technological advancement. Some people are worried about the replacement of human workforce by machines and computers, resulting in a massive number of jobless individuals in countries.

Moreover, the involvement of robots to perform house chores seems to be their next negative point. This is perhaps because of sedentary life style and its possibly unfavorable effects to human health, as people do not get physically active to do laundry, gardening or even some cleaning on a daily basis as they would be some time ago.

On the other hand, I, personally, argue that robots can come in handy to improve the life quality for people and productivity in the workplace. People can have more time to engage in their favourite pastimes and bond with their close ones unless they spend considerably more time for daily domestic chores, commissioning robots instead. Hence, considering grueling schedules at work or study, a person cannot stand but opt for purchasing a robot to do housework.

As for the benefits that robots can bring to the workplace, it is certainly related to a higher efficiency rate. It is clear that machines and computers do not require break time for lunch or days off during weekdays, and there is a huge gap in the accuracy rate of robots and individuals. Therefore, gigantic global tech-companies such as Tesla, Space X, Samsung and others in mining industry are increasing the number of automated lines and sectors day by day, hoping to maintain a stable production process.

In conclusion, although bringing in robots to the workplace and homes may seem negative to a certain extent, I tend to say that this opinion can offer more advantages, including enhanced life quality and output at work.


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🔹 Nowadays more tasks at home and work are being performed by robots.
Is this a negative or positive development ?

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