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Can you mention the strengths and weaknesses?


Task2 essay


Ehhh, taksi yana 10 minut yurganda tugatardimda ehh..😄😄😄maza qilyotgandim....guys, davom ettirib turinglar...


Advertising is another contributor to the popularity of sugar-based drinks. Since manufacturers often employ celebrity endorsements, cartoon characters, and famous sports people in their ads, these targeted advertisements attract and persuade youngsters and children to drink such drinks.


One significant factor contributing to this trend is the taste of such drinks. As they have been added sugar and sweeteners in greater amount, these drinks taste quite appealing to the point where drinkers get addicted to consume them.


With the evolution of social norms and cultural values, it has become increasingly common for individuals to drink sugary drinks more than ever around the globe, especially in urban areas, in recent years. While this change can be attributed to appealing taste and strong advertising campaigns, imposing higher taxes on these products and making sugar content more obvious can work in curbing their negative effects on human health.

One significant factor contributing to this trend is the taste of such drinks. As they have been added sugar and sweeteners in greater amount, these drinks taste quite appealing to the point where drinkers get addicted to consume them.

Advertising is another contributor to the popularity of sugar-based drinks. Since manufacturers often employ celebrity endorsements, cartoon characters, and  famous sports people in their ads, these targeted advertisements attract and persuade youngsters and children to drink such drinks.


✍IELTS WRITING TASK 2- DRINKS 🍾🍾🍾

People are having more and more sugar-based drinks.

What are the reasons?
What can be done to make people drink less?

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Reaksiya bosib qo'yingizlar, men ham "bular meni essayimdan nimadir o'rganib mazza qilganidan reaksiya bosib qo'ygan kamment yozmasayam" degan xayolga borib o'zimni alday va "bir tiyinga qimmat" essaylar yozishda davom etay, aziz do'stlarim mening: sunny, funny, cloudy, windy, stormy, snowy, rainy dyo'stlarim mening.

Ey meni miyyam charchadi, dam omasam bo'maydi, kitobimni o'qiy qolay, sizlarga baribir ∆zarari√ yo'q.

Guys, sezgan bo'lsangiz idiom ga namyok bo'ldi, kammentda yozib ketingizlar bilsalaringiz. 🫡🤫🤭🤐


There is a fact that not all museums and galleries charge admission fees. While free access helps societies expand their knowledge and strengthen bonds serving as cultural hubs, I strongly believe this form of accessibility poses more consequential challenges such as overcrowding and financial drain.

One significant advantage of free galleries and libraries is improved knowledge of individuals. If people are allowed to use resources in such places, they can easily get or enhance their knowledge, an opportunity that is sought after in this modern world where the vast majority of people struggle to find income and make ends meet, or even cover basic necessities, let alone enjoying the life and getting knowledge. These people who have such immense financial burdens are highly unlikely to invest in study or educational materials.

These places are also socially helpful when free of charge. As governing bodies are turning so many public places including green areas, playgrounds, and gardens into housing blocks, individuals are having difficulties to relax, hang out, relieve their stress, negotiate and to find places that are worth visiting to promote cultural knowledge and origins. If such institutions are free of charge, it may go hand in hand for people to navigate through these challenges quite easily.

However tempting such benefits sound, its negatives far outweigh these advantages in the long term. As soon as these artistic and knowledge spots are announced as free, this may appeal a great number of people, this leading to overcrowding inside these buildings. As a result, this may result in conflicts, if not physical fights, between visitors, resource depletion, or even potential difficulty in holding these 'guests'.

This can be exacerbated by financial pressures after a while. Unless visitors have to pay for entry, it means there is almost no flow of income coming in these places. This may place an immense burden on the responsible as they need to renovate, maintain, innovate, and pay for electricity and taxes, which is why this action seems not only impractical but also rather problematic.

In conclusion, despite the social and mental benefits of free entry to galleries and museums, I maintain that such free access seems more disadvantageous with the drawbacks ranging from overcrowding indoors and resource contamination to economical strains.


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📝IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - ART👨‍🎨

Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees, while others have free entry.

Do you think the advantages of free admission outweigh the disadvantages?


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Репост из: Dilshodbek Ravshanov (9.0)
Here's the text version of yesterday's sample ⬇️

It has been noted that there is now more competition for the same jobs between older and younger employees. This tendency may result in issues such as diminished career advancement as well as a lack of job availability for up-and-coming professionals, which, in turn, can result in more emigration, too. I believe this competition should be transformed into cooperation between multiple generations, with improved retirement support also being a possible solution to the problem.

When a senior employee competes with a young professional for the same occupation, one of the two may end up either struggling to climb the career ladder or losing the job totally. In both scenarios, this particular employee is likely to look for solutions elsewhere, with emigration being one of the options. This employment crisis is now a significant problem in countries where the local population is increasing rapidly. The worst repercussion of this development is a country losing some of its talented assets.

To make sure people enjoy equal career opportunities, collaboration has to be favoured over competition. Several mentorship programs can be introduced to make younger professionals learn under the guidance of their older counterparts. This not only guarantees a source of income for both parties but also a chance to learn from experts. Such partnerships could be critical in fields such as medicine, law, and education. In addition, governing bodies should implement enhanced support programs for those who decide to retire. Pension aside, there should be several other benefits for retirees so that the latter are not interested in continuing employment past 60-65.

In summary, fierce competition between various age groups at work can lead to undesirable outcomes and encourage many young workers to emigrate in hopes of finding a better career path abroad. To prevent this competition from escalating further, cooperation between employees has to be prioritized along with better retirement programs provided by the responsible officials.

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‼️Uni buni qo'yaylik hech bo'masa qoraytirib (bolded) qo'yilgan qismlar nimagaligini yaxshilab o'rganib qo'ying, kerak bo'lib qoladi. Bu kanalga kelib, bir ro'shnolik ko'rib keting hech bo'lmasa, eee sizlarnimi?!😡😏😉

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