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It has been noted that there is now more competition for the same jobs between older and younger employees. This tendency may result in issues such as diminished career advancement as well as a lack of job availability for up-and-coming professionals, which, in turn, can result in more emigration, too. I believe this competition should be transformed into cooperation between multiple generations, with improved retirement support also being a possible solution to the problem.
When a senior employee competes with a young professional for the same occupation, one of the two may end up either struggling to climb the career ladder or losing the job totally. In both scenarios, this particular employee is likely to look for solutions elsewhere, with emigration being one of the options. This employment crisis is now a significant problem in countries where the local population is increasing rapidly. The worst repercussion of this development is a country losing some of its talented assets.
To make sure people enjoy equal career opportunities, collaboration has to be favoured over competition. Several mentorship programs can be introduced to make younger professionals learn under the guidance of their older counterparts. This not only guarantees a source of income for both parties but also a chance to learn from experts. Such partnerships could be critical in fields such as medicine, law, and education. In addition, governing bodies should implement enhanced support programs for those who decide to retire. Pension aside, there should be several other benefits for retirees so that the latter are not interested in continuing employment past 60-65.
In summary, fierce competition between various age groups at work can lead to undesirable outcomes and encourage many young workers to emigrate in hopes of finding a better career path abroad. To prevent this competition from escalating further, cooperation between employees has to be prioritized along with better retirement programs provided by the responsible officials.
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