Never end your introduction without stating a clear position.
Do NOT write
❌"I will discuss both views and give my personal opinion"❌.
Do not paraphrase it anyhow. Clearly state your position at the end of your intro:
• This essay will discuss both views and explain why an increase in technology is beneficial to both students and teachers.
@ieltsboyko
Do NOT write
❌"I will discuss both views and give my personal opinion"❌.
Do not paraphrase it anyhow. Clearly state your position at the end of your intro:
• This essay will discuss both views and explain why an increase in technology is beneficial to both students and teachers.
@ieltsboyko