Репост из: IELTS 9.0 √Suhrobjon Abdivaliev
✔️A BAND 9.0 PARAGRAPH
🥇Ripple-effect approach
🥈Temporal comparison approach
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Limited social interaction is rooted in various factors. With the rapid advancement of technology, especially since the Covid-19 pandemic, coupled with the widespread adoption of high-speed internet, online entertainment options, digital learning resources, and remote work opportunities have become more accessible, leading to a surge in sedentary lifestyles. Given these circumstances, it comes as no surprise that many people spend long hours indoors, engrossed in electronic gadgets like smartphones, video gaming consoles, and computers, which restricts opportunities for genuine real-life interactions. Gone are the days when individuals actively engaged in social gatherings, live concerts, and community projects to forge meaningful relationships, as today's omnipresent technological devices push them to pursue solitary activities such as scrolling through social media feeds and binge-watching TV shows.
🥇Ripple-effect approach
🥈Temporal comparison approach
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