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Bugun IELTS Kanallarda g'alati bir narsaga mabodo ko'zila tushmadimi?

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Lekin, tasavvur qilingki, bu kalit sizda yo‘q…

🔴 O‘qigan ma’lumotlaringiz miyangizdan chiqib ketadi, ularni real hayotda qo‘llay olmaysiz.
🔴 Boshlagan ishingizni oxiriga yetkazish qiyinlashadi – motivatsiya tezda so‘nib ketadi.
🔴 Har kuni nimadir o‘rganmoqchisiz, lekin chalg‘ib, vaqtni yo‘qotasiz…

Bunday vaziyatda intizomsizlik va irodaning yetishmasligi sizni orqaga tortadi. Natijada, orzu qilgan natijalarga erishishning o‘zi tushga aylanib qoladi.

Ammo yaxshi yangilik bor!
Intizom va kuchli aqliy yondashuv bilan siz istagan bilimni egallashni, miyyangizni samarali ishlatishni va oldingizga qo‘ygan maqsadlarga erishishni o‘rganishingiz mumkin.

❓ Siz ham tez o‘rganish va intizom bilan ishlashni o‘zlashtirishni xohlaysizmi?
Agar ha bo‘lsa, izohlarda fikringizni yozing yoki + qo‘ying! 🚀


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Tasavvur qiling… 🧠 Siz miyyangizning kalitini topdingiz 🔑 va endi istalgan ma’lumotni tez va oson o‘zlashtirish imkoniyatiga egasiz!

✔️ Endi siz ma’lumotlarni shunchaki yodlab qolmaysiz, balki ularni real hayotda qo‘llay olasiz.
✔️ Kuchli iroda va temir intizom bilan boshlagan ishlaringizni oxirigacha yetkazasiz.
✔️ Eng muhimi, bu jarayondan zavq olasiz!

Agar shunday bo‘lishini istasangiz, o‘zingizga to‘g‘ri yondashuvni topish va miyyangizning to‘liq quvvatidan foydalanishni o‘rganishingiz kerak. Shu haqida sovg'a dars o'tib bersam nima deysiz?

Siz bunga tayyormisiz? 🚀

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My dear students, keling ozgina misollar ko'rib chiqamiza


Quyidagi Introduction larda Thesis Statement (o'z positsiyasini bildirayotgan eng ohirgi gapga) ahamiyat beraylik:

Kecha ma'lumot ni ozgina o'tkazib yuborganlar uchun:

Thesis Statement da pozitsiyangizni bildirayotganda, fikringizning nega shunday ekanini aniq va lo‘nda ifodalash (ortiqcha tafsilotlarsiz) Task Response bahosini oshirishga yordam beradi.


🔹 It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

💰 Many contend that securing financial stability is essential for individuals of all ages. I am generally in agreement with this contention, though I would concede that saving money can be taken to illogical excesses.

🔹 The working week should be shorter, and workers should have a longer weekend.
Do you agree or disagree?

📅 Many today make the argument that the average work week should be shortened in order to allow for longer weekends. In my opinion, though there would be potential economic drawbacks, this approach is both sensible and advisable.

🔹 Some people think that certain old buildings are more worth preserving than others.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

🏛️ While some argue that certain historic structures hold more value and should be carefully preserved, others contend that all old buildings warrant equal attention. In my opinion, there are particular buildings with cultural and community value that deserve prioritization.

The best way to write an introduction if you’re aiming for a high band score .

🔅include their main ideas as well as their clear opinion (position) in their introduction.

⚠️ This isn’t necessary for every IELTS student but it’s highly recommended for students who want to improve to get a band 7 or above.

It will make your position and therefore your essay much clearer. This will boost your Coherence and Cohesion score as well as your Task Achievement.

♻️ How to write a clear and simple introduction 👇
A basic introduction has three sentences:
1. A simple paraphrase of the question.
2. Your position (overall opinion).
3. What you will do in the essay. (This sentence is optional.)

Example Question:
"Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads".
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
⚡Look at the following model introductions.

1. Without main reasons:
It is often suggested that governments should increase investment in railway infrastructure rather than on new roads. Personally, I agree that the benefits of rail outweigh the apparent benefits of new roads. I will explain my reasons in this essay.

2. With main reasons:
It is often suggested that governments should increase investment in railway infrastructure rather than on new roads. Personally, I agree that the benefits of rail, which include less traffic and pollution, outweigh the apparent benefits of new roads. I will explain my reasons in this essay.

⚜ Notice the main reasons (less traffic and pollution) tell the reader exactly what will be discussed later.

This is a huge help for your cohesion and coherence!

Assalomu Aleykum my dear students 👋


Writing qismini o'rganishda davom etamiza


Sizlarga etmoqchi bo'lgan change bu writing qismida, tanlov qilib bo'lgach-

Albatta main reasons larni thesis sentence ga kiritish hisoblanadi


Quyida sizlarga English Version da bu narsa qanday ishlashini misollar bilan tushuntirib bermoqchiman

Oddiy maslahatday tuyishili mumkin, ammo ishoning shu oddiy narsani qilishni boshlaganimzdan keyin Writing 7 case lari qisqa vaqt ichida ko'paygan

Sizga ozgina "hint" beraman

Bu kichik o'zgarish Introduction qismiga bog'liq😊

Assalom Aleykum beautiful people 👋

Writing task 2 da hamma 7 va undan yuqori olgan talabalarimda bitta commonality bor


Shu narsani o'ragtishni boshlaganimdan keyin 7 chiqish case lari ancha ko'paygan


Ammo, ma'lumot 🧠 da yaxshi o'rnashishi uchun, Andrew Huberman (Stanford Professor) javob ga qarashdan oldin, o'zingizdan so'rab biladigan narsalariz bilan taxmin qilib ko'ring deydi


Taxmin qilib ko'ramizmi?

Guys, reactions ga qizgʻanchiq boʻlib ketyapsizlar

IELTS Writing’da 7+ olishning 3 OSON VA SAMARALI USULI

Ko‘pchilik IELTS Writing’da 7+ olish uchun murakkab grammatikalarni, akademik so‘zlarni ishlatish kerak deb o‘ylaydi. Lekin aslida, bu natijaga yetishish uchun sodda va samarali yondashuv kerak.

1. Mikroskop usuli – yozganingizni qisqartiring!

Ko‘pchilik esse yozganda keraksiz so‘zlar va jumlalarni ko‘paytirib yuboradi. Natijada, asosiy fikr chalkashib ketadi. Shuning uchun, yozganingizni mikroskop orqali tekshirayotgandek keraksiz so‘zlarni olib tashlang.

❌ In today's modern world, people tend to use technology more often.
✅ Today, people use technology more.

Murakkab gap o‘rniga sodda va aniq gap yozing:
❌ It can be clearly seen that the number of cars has significantly increased.
✅ Car usage has risen sharply.

2. Matritsa usuli – eng kerakli grammatikani mashq qiling

IELTS Writing’da har qanday murakkab grammatikaga emas, balki eng ko‘p ishlatiladigan grammatik konstruktsiyalarga e’tibor qaratish muhim.

✅ Mashq qilish kerak bo‘lgan 3 ta asosiy konstruktsiya:
1️⃣ Murakkab gaplar (Complex sentences)
Although technology has improved lives, it has also led to social isolation.
2️⃣ Majhul nisbat (Passive voice)
New policies were introduced to reduce pollution.
3️⃣ Shart gaplar (Conditionals)
If governments invest in education, the economy will grow.

👉 Usul: Har kuni yozgan esseingizdan 1-2 ta grammatik tuzilmani chiqarib, uni boshqa misollar bilan mashq qiling.

3. Qoliplarni yashirish usuli – tayyor gaplarni o‘zingiznikiga moslang

Ba’zi talabalar tayyor qoliplardan aynan o‘zini yozib qo‘yadi, bu esa ballning tushishiga sabab bo‘ladi. Buning o‘rniga, tayyor gaplarni o‘z uslubingizda qayta yozing.

✅ Masalan:
Tayyor qolip: This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of online learning.
To‘g‘ri yondashuv: Online learning has both benefits and drawbacks, which will be examined in this essay.

👉 Usul: Tayyor gaplarni olib, ularni sinonimlar va boshqa grammatik tuzilmalarga moslashtiring.

Siz bu usullardan foydalanib koʻrganmisiz? Qanday natija bergan?

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Unda tayyor turinglar, yaqin 15 daqiqada sizlarga writingda 7+ ball olish sirlarini ochaman 🤫

Hello, Juda yaxshi o’ylangan reja albatta har tomonlama ma’qul thanks

Guys, kanalda yaxshi yangilik boʻlyapti)

Sizlarga beradigan maʼlumotlarim foydali va tartibli boʻlishi uchun bunday qilamiz: endi har bir haftaning oʻz nomi boʻladi. Masalan, hozirgi hafta sizlar bilan Writing haqida gaplashamiz. Keyingi hafta "reading haftaligi" boʻladi.

Sizlarga maʼqulmi?

Qoraligim endi bilinyaptimi?😂😆