Feedback & Level Assessment
Bu esse B1 ( Intermediate) darajasida yozilgan.

Kuchli tomonlari:
✅ Mavzuni yaxshi yoritgan, ikkala tomonning fikrlari keltirilgan.
✅ Qiziqarli misollar berilgan.
✅ Mantiqiy tuzilma bor.

Kamchiliklari:

❌ Grammatik xatolar:
"becouse" (to‘g‘ri shakli: because)
"peoples living" (to‘g‘ri shakli: people's lives)
"or different nations" (to‘g‘ri shakli: of different nations)

❌ Jumlalarning noaniqligi:
"Some people think that travelling is the best way to learn about cultures through books, movies and the internet."
Bu noto‘g‘ri tuzilgan, chunki "travelling" orqali "books, movies, and the internet" orqali o‘rganish deyilgan.

❌ Formal tildan uzoqlashish:
"Well, which of these opinions is justified?" (IELTS esse yozishda "Well" kabi norasmiy so‘zlar ishlatish to‘g‘ri emas.)
Rasmiyroq bo‘lishi uchun "So, which of these views is more justified?" deb yozish yaxshiroq.

Tavsiyalar:
Grammatik xatolarni tuzatish:
"becouse" → because
"peoples living" → people's lives
"or different nations" → of different nations

Yozish uslubini yaxshilash:
Jumlalarni yanada aniqroq qilish. Masalan, "One of these debatable topic is." noto‘g‘ri va to‘liq emas.
Iqtiboslar noto‘g‘ri yozilgan: "Seeing once is better than hearing a thousand times."

Akademik tilga e’tibor berish:
Norasmiy so‘zlardan qochish ("Well" o‘rniga "So" yoki "Thus").
Formal so‘z va iboralarni ishlatish ("financially advantageous" yaxshi, lekin "more cost-effective" yanada rasmiy)