Ulug'bek Umidjonov | 9.0


Channel's geo and language: Uzbekistan, Uzbek
Category: Education


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Writing 8.5 x 2
Speaking 9.0 x 2
Contact: @ulugbeksadmin

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Let's first join this one, until I announce our Ramadan challenge.


🎧 Listening 9.0 Challenge – Ramazon oyida

🌙 Bepul 30 kunlik Listening Marathon

🔹 Davomiyligi: 30 kun
🔹 Instructor: Khushnudbek – Listening 9.0 (x3), Overall 8.5

IELTS Listeningdan yuqori natija olishni xohlaysizmi? Ushbu marafon aynan siz uchun!
Kunlik topshiriqlar, strategiyalar va amaliy mashg‘ulotlar bilan Listening skoringizni oshiring!

📢 Mutlaqo bepul va barchaga ochiq!
Qo‘shilish uchun hoziroq linkni bosing:

https://t.me/Khushnudbekielts
https://t.me/Khushnudbekielts


Are you guys ready for this?


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Here are the comments I made on the full version of the above extract. Check it out to learn why the highlighted phrases should be avoided.

You can still sign up for the Writing Sprint and get access to next level feedback service like this. @ulugbeksadmin 👈


This photo features an essay submitted by a Writing Sprint participant.

Can you explain why I highlighted these parts in red?


The afternoon Pre-IELTS group starts tomorrow at 2.00PM. You can show up for the first introductory lesson.


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If anyone is taking the test in mid-March, I have evening classes that take place everyday (including Sundays) at 18.30. There will be a total of 15 practice-based lessons, and course finishes on March the 11th. There are already 18 students in group, who have studied with me for 3 months already. I'm only announcing it in case some of you need last-minute help with your prep.

I also happen to have courses for students of other levels (from Intermediate to Advanced). Write to @diyorbeksielts_yunusobod for enquiries.


🌙 Free Ramadan Challenge?
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  •   30 Live Article Lessons
  •   30 Days of Shadowing
  •   30 Days of Writing Challenge
  •   Paid-course after suhoor
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After some light editing.

Notice the phrase "as many as" in the first detailed paragraph – it is used for emphasis. Here's a funny example I used to explain its usage to my students:

Ulug'bek Umidjonov, the world's best writer, completed this Task 1 essay in as little time as 5 minutes.

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Written in 5 minutes. Here's the task given.

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Commonly Mispronounced Words 📄

@diyorbeksielts

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There's some Israeli guy who's got this app ...


Typically, “this” is used as a demonstrative pronoun. Example: This book is mine. (Refers to a specific book near the speaker). In this case, however, it serves another function, which is common in spoken English: engaging and story telling effect. An Uzbek alternative to this use of "this" is – "Bitta bola bor edi-ku..." or something along those lines. Another example: “I was walking down the street and saw this dog wearing sunglasses!”

Do yourself a favor and start focusing more on such natural language, rather than cherrypicked, seemingly academic vocabulary like "take the responsibility on my shoulder", which makes you sound like a raving madman who's escaped from a loony bin.

@ulugbekumidjonov.


🗣SPOKEN ENGLISH Ok, so there is [___] guy and he has this blindfold on, and I stand next to him wearing glasses...
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  •   one
  •   a
  •   this
  •   some


📌 Choose the best word to complete the gap 💤 And much of the advice out there is probably familiar by now, ____ a little too generic: sleep for 8 hours, avoid bright light...
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  •   although
  •   if
  •   so
  •   but

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Your examiner when you tell him that your teacher told you to use the phrase "From my perspective".


In addition to my group courses, I offer one-on-one classes. However, these are limited to students and teachers who have already scored 7.5+ but are hoping to score 8.0-8.5. If you study with me in this format, I offer you the following:

Two live sessions a week, which focus on writing and speaking
✅ Access to ALL of my online courses and materials
Accountability partner (my assistant will check all of your homework and keep you accountable by texting you every day)

Recommended length of study - 2 months at least. A monthly fee is $200, but if you to choose to pay for two months upfront, it works out cheaper, at $300. Text @ulugbeksadmin if you are genuinely interested. No discounts or refunds available!


Vibes at Diyorbek's IELTS Yunusobod.

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Here's a sneak peek.

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We just wrote a Band 9 Task 2 essay with my students in under 40 minutes. I will share it in a bit.


🔑ANSWERS

Governments play a crucial role in reducing pollution, as do large corporations.

Increased taxation on unhealthy food can reduce obesity, and so can stricter advertising laws.

The government has not introduced strict environmental regulations. Nor have companies taken responsibility.

@ulugbekumidjonov

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