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Nowadays, many people are willing to relocate to a different country in search of a better life or education. There are clearly numerous benefits of doing this such as outlook improvement and financial independence. However, we should not forget the disadvantages including but not limited to homesickness and language barrier.
Let’s start by discussing the benefits. One of the most significant positive aspects of moving overseas can be an enormous development in the way you think. Well, when you move to a foreign country you have to leave your friends and family behind and have to deal with your problems by yourself. Living alone and being responsible for yourself includes a lot of financial planning and calculation for the future to be able to correctly allocate your budget. On top of that, you have to achieve a high level of thinking clearly and making good decisions as well as develop a much better time management in order to pay your bills in time and meet your own demands. All of this could potentially make a person more rounded and more intelligent in the long run. For example, a friend of mine who just came back from the USA visited my house a couple of weeks ago and when I had a face-to-face conversation with him, I have noticed a drastic increase in his outlook.
Another plus point may definitely be the immense amount of financial gain. When we are deciding where to relocate to, we tend to choose a far more developed country than ours for obvious reasons. So, clearly, the average payment of an ordinary worker for a month could be much higher and when any migrant starts working, they can gain more financial wealth and eventually become a financially independent person. Let’s take my classmate Sardor as an example. He is currently in Dubai and only after being employed there for 1.5 years, he has already managed to purchase a private vehicle and even saved some money.
Having said that, there are obvious drawbacks of relocation for living or studying and homesickness is undoubtedly among those. It is a major problem especially among the migrant students as they are still young and at a time in their life when they still have not figured out how to manage living alone and away from their family. A neighbor of mine who dropped out from his university in South Korea and returned to his homeland told me that it was really hard for him to concentrate on his studies while struggling with homesickness as well as feelings of depression.
Second most frequent major drawback can be the language barrier. It creates many other problems, which in turn can cause various other disadvantages. Not knowing the language could potentially hinder one’s ability to get a job and earn money. Besides that, it also prevents you from making new friends and finding your place in the community. All of these aspects, when combined together might lead to a feeling of isolation. Many people have to go back to their own country as these problems are very often too overwhelming for one person to overcome.
In conclusion, although moving abroad can offer several benefits such as a sharp rise in your outlook and perspective along with the potential to become financially successful, it also has its negative aspects like homesickness and language barrier, the latter of which can bring about other unforeseen challenges including the inability to get a high-paid job, make new friends or feel that you are an inseparable part of a community.
Band 8.0-8.5
#writingtask2 #classwork #31minutes
✍️ T. Isroilov
Nowadays, many people are willing to relocate to a different country in search of a better life or education. There are clearly numerous benefits of doing this such as outlook improvement and financial independence. However, we should not forget the disadvantages including but not limited to homesickness and language barrier.
Let’s start by discussing the benefits. One of the most significant positive aspects of moving overseas can be an enormous development in the way you think. Well, when you move to a foreign country you have to leave your friends and family behind and have to deal with your problems by yourself. Living alone and being responsible for yourself includes a lot of financial planning and calculation for the future to be able to correctly allocate your budget. On top of that, you have to achieve a high level of thinking clearly and making good decisions as well as develop a much better time management in order to pay your bills in time and meet your own demands. All of this could potentially make a person more rounded and more intelligent in the long run. For example, a friend of mine who just came back from the USA visited my house a couple of weeks ago and when I had a face-to-face conversation with him, I have noticed a drastic increase in his outlook.
Another plus point may definitely be the immense amount of financial gain. When we are deciding where to relocate to, we tend to choose a far more developed country than ours for obvious reasons. So, clearly, the average payment of an ordinary worker for a month could be much higher and when any migrant starts working, they can gain more financial wealth and eventually become a financially independent person. Let’s take my classmate Sardor as an example. He is currently in Dubai and only after being employed there for 1.5 years, he has already managed to purchase a private vehicle and even saved some money.
Having said that, there are obvious drawbacks of relocation for living or studying and homesickness is undoubtedly among those. It is a major problem especially among the migrant students as they are still young and at a time in their life when they still have not figured out how to manage living alone and away from their family. A neighbor of mine who dropped out from his university in South Korea and returned to his homeland told me that it was really hard for him to concentrate on his studies while struggling with homesickness as well as feelings of depression.
Second most frequent major drawback can be the language barrier. It creates many other problems, which in turn can cause various other disadvantages. Not knowing the language could potentially hinder one’s ability to get a job and earn money. Besides that, it also prevents you from making new friends and finding your place in the community. All of these aspects, when combined together might lead to a feeling of isolation. Many people have to go back to their own country as these problems are very often too overwhelming for one person to overcome.
In conclusion, although moving abroad can offer several benefits such as a sharp rise in your outlook and perspective along with the potential to become financially successful, it also has its negative aspects like homesickness and language barrier, the latter of which can bring about other unforeseen challenges including the inability to get a high-paid job, make new friends or feel that you are an inseparable part of a community.
Band 8.0-8.5
#writingtask2 #classwork #31minutes
✍️ T. Isroilov