Forward from: Diyorbek's IELTS
The examiner feedback: Paragraphing is used appropriately, apart from the single sentence first paragraph.
I wrote this before on the channel, and Bahriddin aka—a friend and colleague from Navoi—shared it on our teachers’ channel.
LESSON: Avoid leaving a one-sentence introduction on its own. Add the overview immediately after it, unless the introduction is already too long.
I wrote this before on the channel, and Bahriddin aka—a friend and colleague from Navoi—shared it on our teachers’ channel.
LESSON: Avoid leaving a one-sentence introduction on its own. Add the overview immediately after it, unless the introduction is already too long.