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Criteria for band 7.0

✅A variety of complex structures is used with some flexibility and accuracy.
✅Grammar and punctuation are generally well controlled, and error-free sentences are frequent.
✅A few errors in grammar may persist, but these do not impede communication.

I also checked the essay using the band 8.0 criteria, it met some of the requirements for band 8.0 but not all of them.
Criteria for band 8.0

✅A wide range of structures is flexibly and accurately used.
✅The majority of sentences are error-free, and punctuation is well managed.
✅Occasional, non-systematic errors and inappropriacies occur, but have minimal impact on communication

While the majority of the sentences are error-free and punctuation is well managed, I didn't use a wide range of structures.

Here's some of the complex sentence structures I used in the essay:

1️⃣🔤While there are certain drawbacks to this, they are far outweighed by the benefits.
2️⃣🔤when there is an ambiguous scene in a movie, people can always ask their partners for an explanation
3️⃣🔤Despite these disadvantages, the advantages are greater.

These are very good sentence structures but they are not enough to score 8-9. Also, some of the sentence structures are repetitive. For example, I used 'when' multiple times, which shows the lack of flexibility.

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