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Speaking part 3️⃣


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The pie charts present information about fundraising sources and expenditures of an American children’s charity in 2016.

Overall, it is clear that donated food was recorded as the main source of fund for the charity, while the biggest proportion of raised money was allocated on program services. Other categories in both charts had relatively smaller rates.

Looking at revenue sources first, more than 86% of charity’s budget was dependent on donation in the form of food. Also, communities contributed for a tenth of its budget, making it considerably higher than program income, at 2.2%. Lastly, government grants, program income and invested money , all made up a tiny 0.8% of total fund.

Regarding the expenditure proportions, organizing charity programs cost significantly more for the institution, requiring more than almost 96% of its fiscal policy. The expenses for fundraising were slightly higher than managemental and general charges, being 2.6% and 1.6%,respectively.


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The bar char details the recycled amount of four types of waste, namely paper, glass, tins and garden in a center between 2011 and 2015.

Overall, the center increased the overall tons of recycling in each waste year by year, despite erratic figures in the mid-period. Moreover, paper was recorded as the most repurposed waste almost in all given years, while garden trashes were recycled least in the center during the period.

Delving into details, more than 55 tons of paper were recycled in the center initially. Once declined sharply to 40 tons, a whopping jump by 30 more tons was witnessed within the remaining years. Similarly, the amount of reprocessed glass ,first, fell markedly till just over 40 tons, before reaching 52 tons by the final year.

Regarding recycled tins and garden trash, the center experienced different patterns of change in their total tons. To be specific, having dropped to just over 25 tons within the first year, recycling tins went up significantly to about 33 tons. During the following years, this figure stayed unchanged by 2014, which then climbed to approximately 40 tons. Finally, the recycling center had lower tons of reused garden garbage during the span, hitting the bottom of 15 tons in 2015.

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Primary school pupils are advised to learn the basics of farming, such as growing vegetables and caring domestic animals. Although this decision might seem as an extra burden to school curriculums, I consider it as an advantageous change.

To start, modern schools have more subjects and extracurricular activities designed to maximize the study period of children. Moreover, so as to increase the employability of pupils in the future, science and foreign languages classes are doubled in primary education. The addition of agriculture classes to this tight schedule might not be as effective as we expect, as the interest level for children is unlikely to be high after having a challenging math or physics class.

Conversely, I support the idea of involving children in farming hours, believing it can offer them a valuable opportunity to connect with nature. This interaction is one of the best ways to relieve stress for people of any age. Additionally, through learning how to grow food and take care of animals, children can have a better awareness of the food they eat, which, in the long term, may help to instill a desire to have healthier dietary choice, understanding how unhealthy chemically grown food is. Consequently, societies of healthier people may be possible to create.

Another probable advantage of agriculture lessons is that children are likely to master all the skills needed to provide themselves with sustainable sources of food. Despite how globalized the world is, the number of problems caused by this globalization is on the rise, leading to the necessity of community-based societies, in which people are responsible for sustaining themselves. Knowing how to grow vegetables or keep animals is one of those responsibilities. As the first step to sustainable societies, teaching the public, particularly children, about agriculture must help us a lot.

In conclusion, regardless of any drawback, I support the idea of teaching farming skills at primary schools, allowing for closer connection with nature and self-sustaining generation.


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#tasktwo


IELTS qiyin deb o’qisangiz, shunday ha juda qiyin


IELTS qiyin emas desam xursand bolsizmi ?

Hamma juda katta natijalar qiyinchilik bilan erishilgan.

Be patient 😇


Zo’r usul bor :

Ota-onangizdan so’rang, qaydarajada siz bilan faxrlanishlarini va sizdan nimani kutishiyapti 😊


Here we go 🤓


Look at the description of each score


#question

Do you know what is TR (Task response) in IELTS writing task Two ?


The pictures illustrate the structural breakdown of a simple solar panel and how energy is produced using it.

In general, the panel is not much complex device, consisting of several distinct parts. The structure utilizes solar energy to heat up not only water but also air.

To begin with, two separate tubes are installed on both edges of the solar panel, while the transparent glass covers the main surface, letting sun rays to flow into to make hot air or water.

Regarding the actual energy production, the only difference between two solar panels – for air and water- is whether the inlet and outlet are connected. In the latter type, the cold water needs to flow through a spiral tube, and gets warm with the help of sun rays. As for warming up the air, the panel has an empty space behind its transparent glass.


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p.s: my lexical resource may have reprogrammed itself into
Uzbek language , thereafter the above report lacks 6 words to meet the 150-word criteria.


#process


The two maps show how a student common room looked five years ago and its current design.

Overall, the room has witnessed some major changes, mainly in furnishing , and turned into a more student-friendly area.

Five years ago, four round-shaped tables with six chairs in each occupied the main space in the room. Walking into, the left boundary was used to provide kitchen facilities such as cupboard, sink, two benches, microwave and refrigerator.

After the recent redevelopment, the room has been accessible for more students with the addition of several new facilities. To be specific, two previous circular tables have been replaced by a single square-shaped one with ten chairs around, while a bench has been removed to make a way for a new microwave. Near the bottom wall of the room, a bench for laptops have been introduced, with a brand-new television and three armchairs for TV views to its right. Moreover, the room visitors now have got access to various types of drinks thanks to a new special machine.

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P.s: make your map reports easy-to-understand unless you end up with lower scores


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Global employment trend has various patterns for those on job markets. One such a norm might be the necessity of leaving family and friends to get a job. In my opinion, this development could bring more negative outcomes compared to possible positives.

On the one hand, having a higher salary can be outlined as a major reason for people to move away from their hometowns. Pursuing better wages may be explained with an increasing cost of living in most countries, and people with lower chances of employability need to look for a job from neighboring towns or countries. A clear example is that in most Central Asian countries, including Uzbekistan, Tajikistan, and Kyrgyzstan, the living cost is increasing at a dramatic pace year by year, resulting in a greater number of migrant workers in different parts of the world. They have been covering all their family expenses, ranging from children’s education to housing, which might not be fulfilled unless they migrate.

On the other hand, I share a view that job migration has several unavoidable downsides, with homesickness and its consequences being the most common one. Migrant workers have to accept the burden of missing important events and memorable moments with their family members and friends, attending them only through video calls or watching videos and photos. If this process continues for years, people will no longer have the same level of job satisfaction, leading to extra stress and anxiety. In the long term, the more stressed individuals are, the more health issues they may suffer even once returned to one’s hometown.

Another disadvantage of work migration is the deterioration of relationships. Humanity is alive with in person communication, which is scientifically proven, and the continuity of pauses in relationships is more likely to end up with splitting away. Migrating is an example of common reasons for those pauses, which is why after coming back to home, migrated workers suffer from being socially excluded, with no as previously close people to talk with.

In conclusion, despite better income, migration has more negative effects including heartache for home and collapse in social ties.

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#tasktwo


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