Here’s how linking words were used in main body paragraphs of yesterday’s essay
Body Paragraph 1 (Dependence Argument) ✔️
⏺ As we live in the era of globalization
➡️ As provides context for the argument, making it easier to understand why some think people are dependent.
⏺ meaning they consistently communicate with and cooperate with others
➡️ Meaning explains how dense cities force people to rely on each other, making the idea clearer.
⏺ The economy of many countries also connects different people
➡️ Also adds more evidence to show how people depend on one another.
⏺ For example, English is now the most popular language
➡️ For example introduces a specific detail to support the argument, making it more concrete.
Body Paragraph 2 (Independence Argument) ✔️
⏺ Despite the arguments made above
➡️ Despite shifts the focus to the opposite view, helping to introduce the argument for independence.
⏺ which, in turn, has made them more independent
➡️ In turn shows the effect of progress on independence, keeping the explanation smooth.
⏺ I also observe many examples of an individualistic lifestyle
➡️ Also adds another layer of support, showing personal observations.
⏺ For instance, in a country like my native Uzbekistan
➡️ For instance introduces a specific cultural example, strengthening the argument.
⏺ However, it is now the norm for thousands of people
➡️ However contrasts the past with the present, showing how things have changed.
#AttentionToDetail ❤️
@dilshodbekravshanov ✈️
Body Paragraph 1 (Dependence Argument) ✔️
⏺ As we live in the era of globalization
➡️ As provides context for the argument, making it easier to understand why some think people are dependent.
⏺ meaning they consistently communicate with and cooperate with others
➡️ Meaning explains how dense cities force people to rely on each other, making the idea clearer.
⏺ The economy of many countries also connects different people
➡️ Also adds more evidence to show how people depend on one another.
⏺ For example, English is now the most popular language
➡️ For example introduces a specific detail to support the argument, making it more concrete.
Body Paragraph 2 (Independence Argument) ✔️
⏺ Despite the arguments made above
➡️ Despite shifts the focus to the opposite view, helping to introduce the argument for independence.
⏺ which, in turn, has made them more independent
➡️ In turn shows the effect of progress on independence, keeping the explanation smooth.
⏺ I also observe many examples of an individualistic lifestyle
➡️ Also adds another layer of support, showing personal observations.
⏺ For instance, in a country like my native Uzbekistan
➡️ For instance introduces a specific cultural example, strengthening the argument.
⏺ However, it is now the norm for thousands of people
➡️ However contrasts the past with the present, showing how things have changed.
#AttentionToDetail ❤️
@dilshodbekravshanov ✈️