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✅Strengths of this essay :

↪️ Keeping the ideas simple and comprehensive that a reader can understand easily .

↪️ Using a wide range of grammars that make the essay more colourful .

↪️ Some topic-related vocabularies ( i will teach you how to gather topical vocabs while you are writing an esaay , and one method to create relevant vocabularies based on topic will also be taught.

↪️ Lastly , logical order making the essay smooth and more easy to stay on attention .

#discussionessay #band9

Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career , while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

When they finish school , teenagers face the dilemma of whether to get a job or continue their education while there are some benefits to getting a job straight after school, i would argue that it is better to go to college or university.

The option to start work straight after shoool is attractive for several reasons . Many young people want to start earning money as soon as possible . In this way , they become independent and they will be able to afford their own house or start a family . In terms of their career , young people who decide to find work rather than continue thair studies , may progress more quickly . They will have the chance to gain real experience and learn practical skills to their chosen profession .This may lead to promotions and a successful career .

On the other hand , i believe that it is more beneficial for students to continue their studies . Firstly , academic qualifications are required in many professions . For example it is impossible to become a doctor , teacher or lawyer without having the relevant degree . As a reasult , university graduates have access to more and better job opportunities , and they tend to earn higher salaries than thise with fewer qualifications . Secondly , the job market is becoming increasingly competitive and sometimes there are hundreds of applicants for one position in a company . Young peeple who do not have qualifications from a university or college will not be able to compete.

For the reasons mentioned above , it seems to me that students are more likely to be successful in their careers if they continue their studies beyond school level .

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