Azamat IELTS | 8.5

Some say that the most important thing about being rich is the opportunity for helping others

To what extent do you agree or disagree?


Wealth is unquestionably paramount in our lives. While it is claimed that aiding others is the most vital trait for the affluent, I do not entirely support this view, since there is a family institution, standing far above all in most cases.

It is quite natural to help others once an individual becomes rich - an instinctual human trait I would say. Whether it is a charity to help the poor or face-to-face meetings with people in need, assistance does mean a lot both for the giver and the receiver. No matter how many extravagant possessions people acquire, their satisfaction levels quickly plateau, whereas helping others provides lasting fulfillment. The joy reflected in others’ eyes, their broad smiles, and their grateful gestures create an irreplaceable sense of fulfillment. This emotional reward often compels benefactors to continue giving, for while people may pass away, the memories they leave behind endure - an invaluable legacy worth more than billions. Meanwhile, people getting assistance try to become a good member of the society, fostering a sense of unity among people of all statuses.

While helping others is valuable, it does not mean that wealthy individuals should do so at the expense of their own well-being. They must prioritize their own well-being first, whether in terms of health or business, before gradually extending help to others. As a nice quote says - of all virtues, family duty is the first - this help, logically, should start within the family. Only then should they turn to others, such as an employee facing financial difficulties or a poor patient diagnosed with a severe disease. Following this logical order enables individuals to make well-informed decisions and assess situations more thoroughly. A well-established businessman in my country, for example, has adopted 12 children, all girls, and been looking after them for around 5 years now. Were it not for his already-pleased and welcoming family, he couldn't have done such a charitable act.

In conclusion, while wealth offers the opportunity to help others, it is most meaningful when assistance is given in a structured and thoughtful manner, beginning with one’s closest circle and extending outward.


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