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​​​🗓 19.01.2025 | Multi-Level Exam | Writing 1-smena C1 level Sample

⏩You attended a language course, and felt that it did not meet your expectations.
⏩Write a letter to improve the quality of the course for future learners
⏩Explain why you were not satisfied from the course
⏩Suggest some ways to improve, such as teaching methods, materials and the structure of the course
⏩Explain how these changes will improve the course for future learners

⏩Dear Mr Johnson,
⏩I hope this letter finds you well. I recently completed the IELTS at your language centre, and I would like to provide some constructive feedback regarding my experience. While I commend the effort and dedication put into the course, I feel that it did not meet my expectations for an advanced-level programme.

⏩Firstly, I found the teaching approach somewhat monotonous and lacking in dynamism. The course predominantly relied on lectures, with minimal opportunities for collaborative or interactive activities, which are essential for learners at an advanced level. Introducing debates or role-playing exercises would provide more chances for active language use. Additionally, the materials used were somewhat outdated and did not sufficiently challenge C1 learners. Incorporating more authentic materials, such as current news articles, podcasts, or TED Talks, would significantly enhance engagement and provide a more immersive learning experience.
Finally, I felt that the structure of the course lacked consistency. Some topics were covered in too much detail, while others were rushed. A more cohesive approach with clearly defined learning objectives and a better balance in pacing would ensure that all key areas are thoroughly explored.

⏩I believe that by implementing these suggestions, the course could be significantly improved, leading to a more stimulating and effective learning environment for future students.

⏩Thank you for considering my feedback.

Yours sincerely,
Adam Smith

⏩Havolani ulashing
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​​​🗓 19.01.2025 | Multi-Level Exam | Writing 1-smena C1 level Sample

🔛 OPINION ESSAY
⏩Some people think that travelling is the best way to learn about different cultures, while other think we can about cultures through books, movies and the Internet.
⏩To what extent do you agree or disagree?

⏩INTRODUCTION
People have differing views regard to the question of whether we can explore other cultures by travelling to these places or just from texts and pictures. In my opinion, it is better to take a trip to the destination we want to discover to understand its culture more.

⏩MAIN BODY 1
On the one hand, gaining information from books and documentaries has two main advantages which are convenient and affordable. In fact, not all people have enough money to travel all year around and to all the places they want. In this case, books and films are great ways to broaden their knowledge about other cultures. Moreover, these things are often cheap and do not require them to go out too much. People can just stay in their own home and they are still able to explore many things around. For example, students who have not made much money yet can still feel like they are having real experience while discovering interesting facts through texts and pictures.

⏩MAIN BODY 2
On the other hand, I believe it is more beneficial to understand various cultures thoroughly by travelling to them. Sometimes books and movies can just give people small aspects of the places they are learning about. They are, to some extent, affected by the perception of their authors or directors. But each one's taste is different. For instance, some people might not like the street food culture in some Asian countries because they find it not hygienic enough, while others think it is a great way to understand more about the country. Therefore, taking a trip to these places themselves might bring people some unique and extraordinary experience that others might not have.

⏩CONCLUSION
In conclusion, while books and travel documentaries are good ways to discover a culture, it is better to learn about a place by travelling there.

⏩Havolani ulashing
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✅Writing Task 2 / 19.01.2025

Some people think that travelling is the best way to learn about different cultures, while other think we can about cultures through books, movies and the Internet.

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

✅Writing Task 1 / 19.01.2025

You attended a language course, and felt that it did not meet your expectations.

Write a letter to improve the quality of the course for future learners

- Explain why you were not satisfied from the course
- Suggest some ways to improve, such as teaching methods, materials and the structure of the course
- Explain how these changes will improve the course for future learners

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​​​🗓 27.12.2024 | Multi-Level Exam | Writing 2-smena C1 level Sample

🔛 Problem / Solution

⏩ Q:In many countries, crime rates among younger people have been rising in recent years.
What are the causes of this, and what are the possible solutions?

💡 Answer:

⏩INTRODUCTION
It is true that the number of young offenders is increasing in the vast majority of countries. While certain factors like poverty can be the culprits of this development, there are steps to be taken to address this issue.

⏩MAIN BODY 1
There are several factors that influence youngsters making them commit crimes. Firstly, poverty can be considered as the main culprit since the prevalence of criminal actions among poor people is notably high as they struggle to meet their daily needs. Secondly, violent video games and movies that include robbery or murder may increase the susceptibility of an individual to real-life criminal actions. In fact, people who engage with this sort of entertainment tend to hurt people with ease and may also struggle with distinguishing right from wrong. Finally, friends have a great influence on a person’s behavior and people feel more relaxed while breaching when they see people close to them doing the same actions.

⏩MAIN BODY 2
However, several measures can be taken to reduce the crime rates among young people. Firstly, government should financially help impoverished families thereby creating a win-win situation. Secondly, the government should put restrictions, such as age limits, to watching violent movies or playing games of this sort for children which can mitigate detrimental effects. Finally, parents should be strict and keep track of their children’s behavior and friends they hang out with from the early childhood as those early years will have significant impact on person’s future life. Therefore, government together with adults has a key role in reducing the crime rates among young people.

⏩CONCLUSION
In conclusion, crime rates which are increasingly prevalent among young people is caused by several factors, with poverty being the most pronounced, and can be solved if necessary measures are taken.

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⏩Havolani ulashing
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