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Kanal geosi va tili: O‘zbekiston, Inglizcha

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

1 Feb, 16:24

00:28

Video oldindan ko‘rish uchun mavjud emas

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Venus, Jupiter and Mars
It’s quite rare to see all of them in the same sky:)

You can see them now

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

1 Feb, 16:20

00:06

Video oldindan ko‘rish uchun mavjud emas

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Looked at the sky and saw the Moon and Venus holding hands ❤️

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The two maps show the transformation of an art gallery ground floor since 2005. Overall, the floor has become more accessible and visitor-friendly, with the introduction of a range of new facilities. It is also clear that the majority of the changes took place in the left side of the building while the right side remained untouched.

Focusing on the 2005 layout, access to the floor was from the bottom of the map, with the exhibition room 1 to the right and exhibition room 4 situated on the other side. There was a spacious entrance hall, with a reception area, behind which were the stairs. While the exhibition rooms 2 and 3 were located to the right of the receptionist and stairs, café and gallery office were on the other side.

Since then, the floor has changed considerably. The entrance now features a wheelchair ramp and the reception area sits closer to the entrance. While the exhibition room 4 made room for temporary exhibition and children’s area, the café and gallery office have been replaced by gallery shop and vending machine. Another alteration is the relocation of the stairs slightly to the left to allow room for a new lift. The three exhibition rooms on the right, however, did not see any changes.

Band 7-7.5

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

30 Jan, 09:07

You can comment now:)

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

30 Jan, 09:06

There are a couple of seats in my current IELTS standard groups.
If you are planning to take the test in 2-3 months, you can join them.

Odd days 14:00-16:00
Even days: 16:15-18:15

Text to @diyorbeksielts_admin for more info.

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

29 Jan, 23:07

Books I’ve read in 2025 dan repost

🔤🔤🔤🔤 1️⃣0️⃣

The Day Lasts More Than A Hundred Years(Asrga Tatigulik Kun) by Chingiz Aitmatov

I read this classic when I was 17. It left a profound impression on me then. So, I decided to re-read it after 10 years.

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

29 Jan, 19:06

Turned off the comments for a while:)

People started to share links, an annoying practice .

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

28 Jan, 14:19

The same topic, different approach

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

28 Jan, 14:18

The best way to provide road safety is to introduce more serious punishments for drivers.
Do you agree or disagree?

There is a view that harsher punishments are the most effective way to ensure road safety. I disagree with this opinion for two key reasons.

One method that can potentially have more impact than introducing serious punishments is providing drivers with regular education. Such training programs allow drivers to constantly update their driving skills. In the majority of countries, skills of drivers are tested only once before they obtain their driver’s license. Naturally, overtime people may slowly lose their ability to operate a vehicle skillfully, which can result in devastating consequences. This can be prevented, if the government provides drivers with training on a regular basis, emphasizing defensive driving and the importance of following traffic laws. Apart from updating the skills of drivers, education should also focus on pedestrians. In some cases, an accident occurs not because of the driver, but the pedestrian because of jaywalking, using mobile phones, and ignoring traffic signs.

Another effective approach is to improve infrastructure design. Creating roads with clear markings, proper signage, and smooth surfaces can prevent accidents. For example, roundabouts can reduce the severity of collisions compared to traditional intersections. Moreover, designating safe zones for pedestrians and cyclists can contribute to safer roads because cyclists usually have to share the road with motorized vehicles or with pedestrians, which increases the chances of accidents. Further change to our current road infrastructure, which can improve road safety, is to implement smart traffic signal systems. These systems respond to traffic flow and reduce congestion and the chances of accidents.

In conclusion, there are more effective ways to achieve road safety than imposing stricter punishments on drivers, including driver training programs and enhancing road infrastructure.

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

28 Jan, 11:39

This essay is an example for a balanced(two-sided) approach for 'agree or disagree' questions.

Analyze it. I'll send an essay with a one-sided approach shortly.

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

28 Jan, 11:37

The best way to provide road safety is to introduce more serious punishments for drivers.
Do you agree or disagree?

There is a view that harsher punishments are the most effective way to ensure road safety. While this approach can increase road safety, I believe there are far better methods to ensure security on roads.

Stricter punishments can serve as a deterrent for potential law breakers. In many countries, drivers often get away with violating traffic rules, even if these violations are of serious nature, such as running a red light and speeding near schools. There could be a noticeable decrease in the number of such violations, if there were more severe punishments, such as community service or even imprisonment. Take my country – Uzbekistan, where such an initiative has been implemented, resulting in a marked drop in traffic-related accidents.

Despite these benefits, introducing serious punishments is not the best approach and instead, other alternatives should be explored. First and foremost, drivers should be offered regular education to constantly update their driving skills. In the majority of countries, skills of drivers are tested only once before they obtain their driver’s license. Naturally, overtime people may slowly lose their ability to operate a vehicle skillfully, which can result in devastating consequences. This can be prevented, if the government provides drivers with training on a regular basis, emphasizing defensive driving and the importance of following traffic laws.

Another effective approach is to improve infrastructure design. Creating roads with clear markings, proper signage, and smooth surfaces can prevent accidents. For example, roundabouts can reduce the severity of collisions compared to traditional intersections. Moreover, designating safe zones for pedestrians and cyclists can contribute to safer roads because cyclists usually have to share the road with motorized vehicles or with pedestrians, which increases the chances of accidents.

In conclusion, severe punishments for drivers can lead to safer roads because they can deter drivers from breaking traffic rules. However, there are more effective ways to achieve road safety, including driver training programs and enhancing road infrastructure.

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

27 Jan, 20:45

Many young people dont do sports these days.

What are the reasons and solutions.

The number of young people who regularly do sports is decreasing at an alarming rate. While this problem can be attributed to a number of factors, it can be addressed in various ways.

One of the main reasons for the lack of young people’s participation in sports is increased academic pressure. Recent years have seen a marked increase in the amount of homework students need to do and exams they take. Students spend a better part of their days completing these assignments and preparing for the exams, which leaves very little time to pursue hobbies, let alone do sports. Technological distractions can be another contributing factor. The majority of young people prefer sedentary activities, such as watching movies, socializing online, and playing online games. This is because these activities are more accessible than going to the gym or attending sport clubs.

However, there are several ways by which the problem can be tackled. One effective measure to solve the problem is organizing regular sporting events. If schools, universities, and even workplaces organize competitions and marathons; and those who actively take part in them are rewarded, this can inspire people to take up sports. Apart from improving their physical health, people can also enjoy increased productivity, concentration, and reduced levels of stress. Further approach is to increase access to sporting facilities. Having sporting facilities, such gyms, football pitches, running tracks, basketball and tennis courts, within walking distance can serve as an incentive for people to do sports, as the lack of access to such areas are cited among the main reasons why people don’t engage in sport activities.

In conclusion, the main reasons behind the problem are academic burden and distractions of technology. However, the problem can be effectively addressed, once the measures suggested are taken, such as organizing frequent sporting events and providing better access to sporting facilities.

Band 8.0

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

27 Jan, 11:59

These groups are face-to-face at Diyorbek’s IELTS learning center(Novza)

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

27 Jan, 11:58

IELTS practice groups

-morning group:
Tuesday/Thursday/Saturday 10:00(4-5 seats available)
-evening group:
Tuesday/Thursday/Saturday at 18:30 (6-7 seats available)

If your exam is within the next 30-40 days, you can join these groups.

These groups focus on revision&practice before your exam.

Text to @diyorbeksielts_admin to join these groups

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

26 Jan, 15:05

There are more and more parents working full time. Some argue that childcare centers are the best in taking care of young children. Others think grandparents are better carers.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

With an increasing number of parents participating in full-time jobs, the issue of how to care for children has become a matter of debate. Some argue that childcare centers are the best option, while others believe that grandparents should take responsibility for looking after their grandchildren. Although grandparent care is a low-cost or even free form of childcare that comes with peace of mind for parents, I believe grandparents may struggle to provide the educational and social experiences that preschoolers need.

One advantage of grandparent care is its cost-effectiveness. Formal childcare services often come with substantial costs, while grandparents typically offer their care voluntarily, reducing or eliminating financial burdens for parents. This arrangement can provide significant savings, especially for families facing tight budgets or those with multiple children requiring care. Additionally, grandparents may be more willing to accommodate flexible schedules or provide care on short notice, reducing the need for parents to seek costly alternatives.

Another benefit of grandparent care is the sense of security and comfort it provides to parents, knowing that their children are being cared for by trusted family members. This peace of mind stems from the strong bond between grandparents and grandchildren and the familiarity of the family environment. Grandparent care can alleviate concerns about the quality of care and the safety of children, allowing parents to focus on their other responsibilities with greater peace and confidence.

However, despite these advantages, I still believe that childcare centers, such as kindergartens, are a better option. Firstly, they offer a structured learning environment. Childcare centers often have a curriculum designed to promote early development, providing age-appropriate educational activities and exposure to a variety of learning opportunities. This can better prepare children for academic challenges in the future.

Moreover, childcare centers provide socialization opportunities that surpass those of grandparent care. In these institutions, children interact and socialize with peers of their own age group, fostering important social skills such as sharing, communication, and cooperation. This aspect of childcare centers is believed to contribute more to a child's overall development and their ability to adapt to various social settings.

In conclusion, grandparents are undoubtedly great caregivers to their grandchildren, considering the costs and concerns associated with most childcare centers. However, I find childcare centers to be a better option for parents to rely on as they promote education and socialization.

Band 8.5

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

26 Jan, 14:27

As a fellow human being who has had many goals and given up on them along the way, sometimes you just have to stop writing down your goals and start taking action.

Bars.

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

25 Jan, 23:44

First of all, I apologize that my ‘IELTS’ channel and ‘book’ channel are mixing into one, sometimes.

I’m doing this so you will be my accountability partner for I may easily abandon this newfound hobby of mine otherwise.

And of course, if I encourage some of you to read more books, that’d be the added benefit.

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

25 Jan, 23:36

Books I’ve read in 2025 dan repost

🔤🔤🔤🔤 7️⃣

Just finished the book.

As a huge Sherlock Holmes fan, I might be biased but this is how you write a story.

Full of wit, twist, mystery, and of course exciting revelation at the end.

Rating 4.7/5.0

@booksIreadin2025

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

24 Jan, 12:50

Any reliable and fast book delivery services in Tashkent?

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

23 Jan, 06:20

Some people think that art is an essential subject for school children while others think it is a waste of time.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

While some people emphasize the significance of art lesson in schools, others think that students should focus on other more important subjects. I agree with the former view.

One reason why art lessons are regarded as a waste of time is they are not directly linked to career opportunities. Critics arguethat instead of studying arts, students should concentrate on subjects like science, math, and technology, which are high in demand in today’s job market. These subjects usually offer better financial stability and career growth. Another argument is that generally very few children have artistic interests and talents. Mandatory art classes may not appeal to the majority, leading to a lack of engagement and wasted classroom time. Therefore, it is considered important to prioritize the collective interests of students.

In my opinion, however, art should remain an integral part of school curriculum. First and foremost, engaging in art activities allows students to express their thoughts, emotions, and ideas in ways that other subjects may not. This fosters creativity, which is a valuable skill not only in artistic world but also in problem-solving across various fields. Studying and participating in art can also boost students’ mental wellbeing. Engaging in painting, drawing, and music can reduce stress and anxiety which students experience in school due to exams and deadlines.

In conclusion, art lessons offer limited career opportunities and are not liked by every student equally but such lessons develop students’ creativity and can help deal with stress. Therefore, the argument that art lessons are a waste of time is unjustifiable.

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Band 7.5

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