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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

21 Nov, 12:02

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Writing task 1da ‘The indicator/the index/the indication’ degan so’zlarni o’rgatadigan o’qituvchidan qochish kerak.

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

20 Nov, 19:33

Band 7.0-7.5 full essay anaylsis.pdf

Here's the pdf of the essay analysis

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

20 Nov, 17:15

ChatGPT cant do this💪

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

20 Nov, 16:51

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Criteria for band 7.0

✅A variety of complex structures is used with some flexibility and accuracy.
✅Grammar and punctuation are generally well controlled, and error-free sentences are frequent.
✅A few errors in grammar may persist, but these do not impede communication.

I also checked the essay using the band 8.0 criteria, it met some of the requirements for band 8.0 but not all of them.
Criteria for band 8.0

✅A wide range of structures is flexibly and accurately used.
✅The majority of sentences are error-free, and punctuation is well managed.
✅Occasional, non-systematic errors and inappropriacies occur, but have minimal impact on communication

While the majority of the sentences are error-free and punctuation is well managed, I didn't use a wide range of structures.

Here's some of the complex sentence structures I used in the essay:

1️⃣🔤While there are certain drawbacks to this, they are far outweighed by the benefits.
2️⃣🔤when there is an ambiguous scene in a movie, people can always ask their partners for an explanation
3️⃣🔤Despite these disadvantages, the advantages are greater.

These are very good sentence structures but they are not enough to score 8-9. Also, some of the sentence structures are repetitive. For example, I used 'when' multiple times, which shows the lack of flexibility.

#essay
#task2

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

20 Nov, 12:41

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Criteria for band 7.0:
✅The resource is sufficient to allow some flexibility and precision.
✅There is some ability to use less common and/or idiomatic items.
✅An awareness of style and collocation is evident, though inappropriacies occur.
✅There are only a few errors in spelling and/or word formation and they do not detract from overall clarity.

In general, I tried to use less common items such as an ambiguous scene, a better overall understanding, strengthen relationships, potential spoilers, but these are very limited.

I also lacked the flexibility, precision, and sophistication needed to meet higher criteria:

Here’s some minor mistakes:

🛑noise of their phones - this phrase feels awkward because native speakers typically use "noise from" or specify the source of the sound more naturally.
✅’the distracting buzz of their phones' - would be a better alternative.
🛑when they have a company - The phrase is grammatically off because "company" in this context doesn’t need an article and is typically used without "a."
✅'when accompanied by friends or family' - would be a better alternative.

Overall, the essay lacks the sophistication, precision, and flexibility to get a higher score in LEXICAL RESOURCE.

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#task2

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

20 Nov, 09:37

Today, we’ll analyze Lexical Resource(Vocabulary) and Grammatical Range and Accuracy

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

19 Nov, 21:46

Summarize the post below 👇

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

19 Nov, 21:41

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Criteria for band 8.0:

The message can be followed with ease.
Information and ideas are logically sequenced, and cohesion is well managed.
Occasional lapses in coherence and cohesion may occur(this part is important)
Paragraphing is used sufficiently and appropriately.

Here's why:

When I checked the essay against the band 7 criteria, it didn't match

Band 7 criteria basically say:
✔️a few lapses
✔️some inaccuracies in referencing and substitution

These errors do not exist in the essay, so it must be a band 8 or 9 essay.

Honestly, there is no big difference between band 8 and 9 in Coherence and Cohesion.
The biggest difference is this:

✔️Band 9: Lapses are minimal
✔️Band 8: Lapses are occasional

In this context, a lapse is anything that makes the text hard to follow.
In my essays, I can point out two lapses:

1️⃣🔤Phrases like "another disadvantage" and "another advantage" are repeated in consecutive sentences
2️⃣🔤The transition between the first disadvantage (lack of discussions) and the second disadvantage (lack of bonding) feels a bit sudden and abrupt.

Here's what can push it to band 9.0

1)Instead of repeating the word 'another', I can use alternatives like 'a further drawback' or 'an additional downside'

2)A linking sentence or phrase connecting the two ideas could make the flow smoother: 'In addition to missing discussions, being alone also impacts social interactions'

#task2
#essay

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

19 Nov, 21:33

Another long post coming out on Coherence and Cohesion…

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

19 Nov, 14:56

It’s a long post, but it’ll give you some insights into the difference between band 7 and 9 in task response.

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

19 Nov, 14:50

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Criteria for Band 7.0:

✅The main parts of the prompt are appropriately addressed.
✅A clear and developed position is presented.
✅Main ideas are extended and supported but there may be a
tendency to over-generalise or there may be a lack of focus and
precision in supporting ideas/material.

Here's why:

✅I addressed all parts of the task by presenting two advantages and two disadvantages.
✅I presented a clear position throughout the response(the reader can clearly see what my opinion is in the intro/body paragraphs and in the conclusion)
❎There is no overgenralization because I tried to hedge(=soften my language) by using modal verbs and adverbs of frequency e.i This can result in - not This will result in, This usually means - not this means. However, there is a lack of precision in my supporting ideas/material.

For example:

The lack of social bonding is another disadvantage. Watching TV or movies with the whole family or a group of friends is regarded as a social event which can help strengthen relationships.

In this argument, I didnt actually explain HOW watching movies can strengthen bonds. I just mentioned the idea and didn't really support it.

Here's what a band 9.0 development would look like:

The lack of social bonding is another disadvantage. Watching TV or movies with the whole family or a group of friends is regarded as a social event which can help strengthen relationships. For instance, families can bond over emotional moments in a film or laugh together during a comedy show, creating lasting memories. Similarly, friends who watch movies together can engage in conversations about their favorite scenes or characters, deepening their connections and fostering a sense of togetherness

#task2
#essay

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

19 Nov, 13:19

Let’s analyze the essay in terms of each criterion.

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

19 Nov, 10:16

People these days watch TV, films, and other programs alone rather than with other people.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Many people increasingly prefer to be on their own when watching TV, films, and other programs. While there are certain drawbacks to this, they are far outweighed by the benefits.

One downside of watching movies alone is the lack of important discussions. For example, when there is an ambiguous scene in a movie, people can always ask their partners for an explanation, when they have a company. This can result in a better overall understanding of the content. In contrast, when the viewer is on their own, they do not have this opportunity. The lack of social bonding is another disadvantage. Watching TV or movies with the whole family or a group of friends is regarded as a social event which can help strengthen relationships. When a person decides to be by themselves, they are deprived of such an opportunity.

Despite these disadvantages, the advantages are greater. One major upside is that there will be fewer distractions. When a person has co-viewers, this usually means putting up with their questions, noise of their phones or eating, and even worse, potential spoilers. These can affect the overall experience, causing viewers to feel dissatisfied. Another advantage of being alone in front of the screen is the increased freedom. This independence ranges from being able to choose what a person watches to the opportunity to pause, rewind, and skip the movie when necessary.

In conclusion, the disadvantages of watching TV or movies alone include the lack of discussions and social bonding but they are not as significant as the advantages, such as reduced distractions and increased freedom.

Band 7-7.5

263 words

#essay
#task2
#classwork

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

18 Nov, 13:53

Using the prompts above, can you talk about the causes of increased noise levels in cities?

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

18 Nov, 13:51

If you are aiming for a high score in writing(usually 7+), you must be able to write very effective topic sentences.
A topic sentence means a sentence that shows the main idea of your paragraph/argument.

I often recommend students learning some universal sentences that can always be used in one particular question type. For example, to talk about the causes of a problem or causes in general, you can use the following sentences:

One significant factor contributing to this issue is...
Another major cause behind this problem is...
This problem can also be attributed to...

To talk about advantages, you can use these:

One notable advantage of X is...
Another key benefit is that...
A further positive aspect of this is...

Learning such sentences helps you save time and outline your arguments in a very precise manner.

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

18 Nov, 09:05

✨UPDATED LIST OF TASK 1 AND 2

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18 Nov, 07:01

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

17 Nov, 18:43

The Moon and Jupiter are holding hands tonight:)

Right now

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

17 Nov, 14:11

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Jo’rabek Sanokulov | IELTS

16 Nov, 18:49

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Regular communication between employees and managers is the most important factor leading to a successful organization.

Do you agree or disagree?

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A million dollar question: Can I include numbers in the overview? 👀

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We had the same essay just yesterday with my IELTS groups👀👀

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