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🔔 Ideas about "Work"

➡️ The benefits of staying in the same job for life:
🏷 Employees have a stable career with one employer.
🏷 They have a good pension and health insurance.
🏷 Their salaries gradually increase.
🏷 They may be promoted within the organisation.
🏷 They demonstrate loyalty.
🏷 Experienced staff can be trusted with more responsibility.
🏷 They become part of a team.
🏷 There is a clearly defined path for development.

➡️ The benefits of not staying in the same job:
🏷 People often change jobs in order to further their career.
🏷 Another company may offer a promotion or a higher salary.
🏷 People who change jobs can gain experience.
🏷 They can learn different skills.
🏷 Changing jobs is interesting and challenging.
🏷 People can retrain in a different occupation.
🏷 In a fast-changing world workers need to be flexible.
🏷 People need to develop a range of experience and skills

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🔖 True Riches (Money Is Not True Wealth)

There was once a boy who was growing up in a very wealthy family. One day, his father decided to take him on a trip to show him how others lived who were less fortunate. His father’s goal was to help his son appreciate everything that he has been given in life.

The boy and his father pulled up to a farm where a very poor family lived. They spent several days on the farm, helping the family work for their food and take care of their land.

When they left the farm, his dad asked his son if he enjoyed their trip and if he had learned anything during the time they spent with this other family.

The boy quickly replied, “It was fantastic, that family is so lucky!”

Confused, his father asked what he meant by that.

The boy said, “Well, we only have one dog, but that family has four–and they have chickens! We have four people in our home, but they have 12! They have so many people to play with! We have a pool in our yard, but they have a river running through their property that is endless. We have lanterns outside so we can see at night, but they have the wide open sky and the beautiful stars to give them wonder and light. We have a patio, but they have the entire horizon to enjoy–they have endless fields to run around in and play. We have to go to the grocery store, but they are able to grow their own food. Our high fence protects our property and our family, but they don‘t need such a limiting structure, because their friends protect them.”

The father was speechless.

Finally, the boy added, “Thank you for showing me how rich people live, they’re so lucky.”

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🔃 Writing Task 2 Tips for Higher Scores

To achieve a higher band score in IELTS Writing Task 2, providing evidence of advanced writing techniques is a must. In this section you can find out more about complex sentence structures, advanced vocabulary and the effective use of examples to improve your writing.

Using Advanced Vocabulary
Let’s say you want to get a band 8 on vocabulary in your IELTS Writing Task 2. To make it happen, you would need to display skilful use of uncommon lexical items (i.e. vocabulary). Remember, this doesn’t mean cramping your essay with “difficult” or “high-sounding” words. Instead, use idiomatic language (e.g. phrases, phrasal verbs) and uncommon terms that are related to the topic. A sound understanding of collocations is also expected at this level, so you should know which words go together and which words are suitable to use for specific topics. Here are some examples:

Examples of phrases: school of thought, put simply, on balance, to go green.

Examples of phrasal verbs: use up, carry out, cut down on, look into.

Whatever you do, don’t forget the golden rule: if you’re unsure how to use an uncommon term, find a simpler equivalent you can use in its place. Too many lexical errors can bring down your score, so practise using advanced vocabulary in context to ensure accuracy and appropriateness.

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🔔 Useful Vocabulary & Expressions of #Essay317

〰️ Counterproductive: Having the opposite of the desired effect
Example: child experts fear the Executive’s plans may prove counterproductive

〰️ Charitable: Relating to the assistance of those in need
Example: he has spent £50,000 on charitable causes

〰️ Pivotal: Of crucial importance in relation to the development or success of something else
Example: Japan’s pivotal role in the world economy

〰️ Productive: roducing or able to produce large amounts of goods, crops, or other commodities
Example: the most productive employees

〰️ Workforce: The people engaged in or available for work, either in a country or area or in a particular firm or industry
Example: a quarter of Galway’s manufacturing workforce are being put out of a job

〰️ Priority: The fact or condition of being regarded or treated as more important than others
Example: the safety of the country takes priority over any other matter

〰️ Workload: The amount of work to be done by someone or something
Example: he had been given three deputies to ease his workload

〰️ Vocational: Relating to an occupation or employment
Example: vocational training

〰️ Internship: The position of a student or trainee who works in an organization, sometimes without pay, in order to gain work experience or satisfy requirements for a qualification
Example: they encouraged students to apply for newspaper internships

〰️ Obligatory: Required by a legal, moral, or other rule; compulsory
Example: use of seat belts in cars is now obligatory

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🔔 Ideas about "Water"

➡️ Water and Politics
🏷 The supply of water is also an important political issue.
🏷 Huge amounts of water are needed for agriculture and industry.
🏷 The irrigation of crops accounts for a large proportion of water use.
🏷 A water crisis could lead to political conflicts or even wars.

➡️ Argument: water should be free
🏷 Some people believe that water should be free for everyone.
🏷 Governments should supply water to all homes at no cost.
🏷 Private companies should not be allowed to profit from this natural resource.
🏷 Money from taxes can be used to pay for water supply systems.

➡️ Argument: water should not be free
🏷 If water is free, people take it for granted.
🏷 They do not think about how much water they waste.
🏷 They leave taps running while washing or brushing their teeth.
🏷 If we have to pay for water, we will use it more responsibly.
🏷 Water supply systems are extremely expensive.
🏷 Investment is needed to maintain and improve them.
🏷 Private companies may provide a better service than governments.
🏷 If they provide an efficient service, they will make more money.
🏷 They will repair leaks to avoid losing money.

➡️ Bottled Water: Opinions
🏷 Some people carry bottles of water wherever they go.
🏷 For example, they take bottles of water to work or to the gym.
🏷 They believe that bottled water is healthier than tap water.
🏷 They also argue that it tastes better.
🏷 However, other people believe that we should consume less bottled water.
🏷 Plastic water bottles add to litter and waste problems.
🏷 Companies should not be able to make a profit from water.
🏷 It is unethical to make money by selling packaged water.
🏷 There is no difference in quality between bottled and tap water.

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🔖 DON'T CHASE BUTTERFLIES

A young lad asked his grandfather,

"Grandpa, I want to be a star, I want to be in movies. When I grow up, I want to see the world, drive nice cars, and live in a house made of glass. Yes, I really want to be successful and great. So tell me, how do I chase all my goals, and catch them faster?"

The grandfather stopped for a moment, turned around, and then spotted a huge and super beautiful butterfly dancing on a flower. At once, he said,

"Oh, my God! What a magnificent butterfly! Now, hurry... hurry and chase after it! Make sure you catch it! Don't let it fly away! Move!"

The young lad hurriedly ran to the butterfly, but as he tried to take hold of it, the butterfly suddenly flew up into the wind. He ran after it, trying to catch it, but it was flying so fast. He ran around and around the garden until he got tired, and then he could no longer see the butterfly. Panting with loss of breath, he returned to his grandfather, wheezing,

"I couldn't catch it, grandpa! It flew away!"

The grandfather smiled for a moment, then held the young lad by his hand and took him to a corner. He waited until he calmed down, then he whispered into his ear,

"Listen, boy, let me teach you a lesson, a valuable life lesson. If you spend your time chasing butterflies, they'll fly away. But if you spend your time creating a beautiful garden, the butterflies will come to you. You see... that butterfly is like your goals in life. In our journey of success, it's easy to get caught up in the pursuit of immediate goals, the fleeting butterflies of life. However, the real magic happens when we focus on building something substantial, akin to cultivating a vibrant garden. Instead of relentlessly chasing, channel your energy into creating and nurturing. Build something meaningful, whether it's a project, a skill, or a relationship. The beauty you will cultivate will attract opportunities, experience, and success naturally. So don't chase love, money, or success. Become the best version of yourself and those things will come to you."

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Using Complex Sentence Structures
The ability to use a range of grammar structures (simple, compound and complex sentences) accurately and appropriately can get you a higher score in IELTS Writing Task 2. Compared to simple and compound sentences, complex ones are harder to get right. A complex sentence combines an independent clause with one or more dependent clauses. Here are some examples:

Example: Although many people believe that zoos are beneficial for education, others argue that they are inhumane and should be banned.

Example: If the government implements strict policies, pollution levels will decrease significantly.

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🔔 Useful Vocabulary & Expressions of #Essay316

〰️ The influx of smb/smth: the fact of a lot of people, money or things arriving somewhere
— Example: a massive/sudden influx of visitors.

〰️ To be associated with smth: having a connection between people or things in your mind
— Example: I always associate the smell of baking with my childhood.

〰️ The odds of something: the degree to which something is likely to happen
— Example: The odds are that (= it is likely that) she'll win.

〰️ To halt something: to stop; to make somebody/something stop
— Example: We are failing to halt the destruction of the rainforest.

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🔔 Ideas about "Water"

➡️ Importance of Clean Water
🏷 Water is an essential natural resource.
🏷 Humans need access to clean, safe drinking water in order to live.
🏷 Poor water quality is a major cause of disease and death in some countries.
🏷 Water usually needs to be treated before we can drink it.
🏷 Developing countries often lack the means to treat and supply water to citizens.
🏷 Developed countries tend to have much better sanitation.
🏷 Citizens have access to clean tap water.
🏷 Drinking water is not contaminated by sewage or waste water.
🏷 The supply of clean water would improve public health in many developing countries.

➡️ Water Supply
🏷 Urban life would be impossible without water supply systems.
🏷 These systems are massive engineering projects.
🏷 Many professionals are involved in their planning, construction and maintenance.
🏷 The supply and distribution of water are major concerns.
🏷 Water is becoming scarce in some countries.
🏷 Areas that suffer droughts often need to import water.
🏷 As populations grow, there is more pressure on water supplies.
🏷 This could lead to a water crisis.

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🔖 A Lesson in Love: A Son's Tender Care for his Father

A son took his father to a restaurant to enjoy a delicious dinner. His father was quite old and therefore a little weak too.
While eating, food occasionally fell on his shirt and pants. The other guests watched the old man with their faces contorted in disgust, but his son remained calm.

After they both finished eating, the son, quietly helped his father and took him to the toilet. Cleaned food scraps from his crumpled face, and attempted to wash food stains from his clothes; graciously combed his gray hair and finally put on his glasses.

As he left the bathroom, a deep silence reigned in the restaurant. The son was ready to foot the bill, but before leaving, a man, also old, got up and asked the old man's son: 'Don't you think you left something here ? '

The young man replied: 'No, I did not leave anything.' Then the stranger said to him: 'You left a lesson here for every son, and a hope for every father! ”The whole restaurant was so quiet, you could hear a pin drop.

One of the greatest honors that exists, is being able to take care of those who have taken care of us too. Our parents and all those elders who sacrificed their lives, with all their time, money and effort for us, deserve our utmost respect.

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🔃 How large a vocabulary is needed to get a Band 7 for Writing? Does vocabulary really matter in Writing?

To achieve a Band 7 in Writing, a large vocabulary matters a lot. If you look at the IELTS public band descriptors (see here), you’ll notice that the Band 7 category for vocabulary (“Lexical Resource”) says the following:

— Uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision;
— Uses less common lexical items with some awareness of style and collocation;
— May produce occasional errors in word choice, spelling and/or word formation.

It is important to pay attention to the phrase “sufficient range”. This means that you need to use a wide range of simple AND less common vocabulary. For example, if the topic of the question relates to cars, don’t just keep writing “cars” for the whole essay; use less common synonyms for “car” like “vehicle”, “automobile”, etc. It would be unnatural to only use less common vocabulary, so remember to use a mixture of simple and more complex words.

It is also important that you show “some awareness of style and collocation” as you use less common vocabulary. This means that you shouldn’t just use a less common word because you memorized it; you should be able to use it in an appropriate context where native speakers would be likely to use it. To become skilled at this, you should:

— watch a wide range of English language videos (TED talks, TV shows, movies, etc.);
— read a wide range of English language texts (website and newspaper articles, books, etc.) so that you can develop a feel for the language.

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🔔 Useful Vocabulary & Expressions of #Essay315

〰️ to retain smth: to keep something; to continue to have something
— Example: She has a good memory and finds it easy to retain facts.

〰️ To impair smth: to damage something or make something worse.
— Example: His age impaired his chances of finding a new job.

〰️ To be vulnerable to smth: weak and easily hurt physically or emotionally
— Example: Old people are particularly vulnerable to the flu.

〰️ chaos: a state of complete confusion and lack of order
— Example: The house was in chaos after the party.

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