Dilshodbek Ravshanov (9.0)

The chart shows the change in forested land in different regions of the world over time.

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The bar chart presents information on the changes in forest cover in 10 regions over time. In general, in five out of ten regions, increases in the percentage of forested land were recorded, whereas in others, the proportion of cleared forest cover exceeded gains. It should be noted that the most significant decreases in forested land took place in the 1995-2000 timeframe.

Central Asia, North America, and Europe had minimal increases, all under 0.5%, in forest cover among the regions with growth. East Asia and the Caribbean, on the other hand, had increases of over 0.5%, with the largest rise in East Asia between 2000 and 2005. In this particular period, East Asia’s forest cover had risen by 1.3%. In this same period, the Caribbean region also had its biggest growth, reaching 0.9%.

Among the regions with a decline in forested land, Central America stands out with the worst decreases in all three spans. Between 1995 and 2000, particularly, this region recorded a -1.5 percent change, the largest among all regions. Within this timeframe, North Africa and South Asia also saw reductions of over -0.5%, but between 2000 and 2010, their decreases were not as significant.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Children are lately spending hours of their daily time using their smartphones. I believe this happens because of the interconnectedness of the modern world and parents’ inability to monitor children’s routine. As for the impact of this tendency, it is clearly negative as children often develop addiction to these gadgets and lead an unhealthy lifestyle.

Phones were initially used for calls and texts, but smartphones are multifunctional and are now integral parts of our lives. Even for children, it may be challenging to be connected to the world without a device, especially when it comes to educational responsibilities. However, phone usage does not occur only because of how dependent children are, but also because of no limits placed by parents. In other words, children in certain families are not monitored well enough, meaning they overuse their phones because of parental neglect.

With regard to the impact of this, there are obviously a number of undesirable outcomes. Mainly, children tend to become overly reliant on phones, spending a bigger part of their day using this device. Health-wise, this is quite detrimental since any addiction to technology is usually associated with a sedentary lifestyle. Aside from physical factors, mental health can be damaged as well. For instance, a child playing violent games on a smartphone for a long time can develop aggressive behavior, leading to isolation and antisocial acts. These are the most obvious consequences of smartphone overuse.

In conclusion, children are mostly overusing their smartphones, which happens due to factors such as technology’s integration and parental irresponsibility. The impact of this development is quite unhealthy, as the examples above suggest.

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The pie charts compare the percentage of water allocated to three purposes, which are industrial, agricultural, and domestic. Percentages are provided for six different regions of the world. Overall, in four out of six regions, agricultural use is the most common, whereas in North America and Europe, the biggest proportion of water is used for industrial purposes.

As mentioned above, using water for farming purposes is the most common among four regions, with percentages ranging from 71% in South America to 88% in Central Asia. Proportions of water used for industries and houses in these regions are quite insignificant, with most of them under 10%. However, in South America, 19% of all water is distributed to domestic use, and one-tenth is utilized for industries.

In North America and Europe, the main way to use water is to provide it for industrial usage, with the former region reporting 48% and the latter reporting 53%. In both of these regions, using water for farming accounts for 39% and 33%, respectively.

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